for Dollhouse1/31/2012 c1 
3AnotherStupidNickname
Pretty amazing, how you can make the reader shiver in one hundred words... I especially like the thing with the clock and harmony.
3AnotherStupidNicknamePretty amazing, how you can make the reader shiver in one hundred words... I especially like the thing with the clock and harmony.
10/16/2011 c1 14Wendy Brune
Awh! This is such a pretty drabble. I love love LOVE the stuff in the parenthesis here. It's beautiful and captivating. You create such a haunting contrast between the mundane and the dark, and it works wonders.
Very nice. I would have loved to see this in something bigger than a drabble!
14Wendy BruneAwh! This is such a pretty drabble. I love love LOVE the stuff in the parenthesis here. It's beautiful and captivating. You create such a haunting contrast between the mundane and the dark, and it works wonders.
Very nice. I would have loved to see this in something bigger than a drabble!
10/15/2011 c1 4Emily Mae
Wow, this is great! The writing style really makes me feel like I'm inside Dumbledore's head and I like the fact that you subtly incorporate that Dumbledore was supposed to travel the world after leaving Hogwarts but couldn't because of how ill Ariana was. Very nicely done!
4Emily MaeWow, this is great! The writing style really makes me feel like I'm inside Dumbledore's head and I like the fact that you subtly incorporate that Dumbledore was supposed to travel the world after leaving Hogwarts but couldn't because of how ill Ariana was. Very nicely done!
10/9/2011 c1 60AngelofDarkness1605
It took me a minute to place this, but when I did I realized that I like this one most of the three you posted :)
60AngelofDarkness1605It took me a minute to place this, but when I did I realized that I like this one most of the three you posted :)
10/4/2011 c1 40Expecting Rain
I like this, it's so forbodeing. And I think it fits the prompt, with Dumbledore thinking of the world waiting for him.
40Expecting RainI like this, it's so forbodeing. And I think it fits the prompt, with Dumbledore thinking of the world waiting for him.
10/3/2011 c1 4Belladonna Dumbledore
This is ... poetry. I am stunned! You have succeeded in creating a totally hollow feeling in my chest and a not in my throat by writing only a hundred words!
4Belladonna DumbledoreThis is ... poetry. I am stunned! You have succeeded in creating a totally hollow feeling in my chest and a not in my throat by writing only a hundred words!
10/3/2011 c1 crissu
Not travelling..I think it fits the prompt. Is it Dumbledore with the burden of looking after her sister after his mother died? I think you captured very well the feeling of captivity, especially in the last line. The brackets have an amazing effect here.
As I always seem to say when it comes to your drabbles, I loved it:)
Not travelling..I think it fits the prompt. Is it Dumbledore with the burden of looking after her sister after his mother died? I think you captured very well the feeling of captivity, especially in the last line. The brackets have an amazing effect here.
As I always seem to say when it comes to your drabbles, I loved it:)