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6/13/2012 c7 VotumAstrum
Good! Although the ending didn't really match the feeling of the beginning. He beginning was more sort of just describing the atmosphere of the wedding, and then at the end you kinda jus randomly mixed in Ripred's feelings about love,which was kinda like a whole seperate topic. I think that they would have benn better as two different poems and then you could maybe add elaborations and depth to them. Great ideas though! Keep up the good work! I was really suprised when I read this because I have not read it in a while and it was the beginning of a great set of ideas for a wedding and children. I am really interested to see Ripred's feelings about their children and his thoughts on their relationship. I would like to see the story go in that direction with various stabs of fighting and battle and maybe some inner war thing going on. Great ideas!
Good! Although the ending didn't really match the feeling of the beginning. He beginning was more sort of just describing the atmosphere of the wedding, and then at the end you kinda jus randomly mixed in Ripred's feelings about love,which was kinda like a whole seperate topic. I think that they would have benn better as two different poems and then you could maybe add elaborations and depth to them. Great ideas though! Keep up the good work! I was really suprised when I read this because I have not read it in a while and it was the beginning of a great set of ideas for a wedding and children. I am really interested to see Ripred's feelings about their children and his thoughts on their relationship. I would like to see the story go in that direction with various stabs of fighting and battle and maybe some inner war thing going on. Great ideas!
6/7/2012 c1 Team Juggernaut
I can say onething: W...T...F...IS THIS?
It isn't good, for one thing. A poem, really? You stink...
I can say onething: W...T...F...IS THIS?
It isn't good, for one thing. A poem, really? You stink...
6/3/2012 c5 X.E.A.M
loveLuxa Gregorwedding babies AWESOME STORIES ADN MORE REVIEWS!
loveLuxa Gregorwedding babies AWESOME STORIES ADN MORE REVIEWS!
5/2/2012 c1 
10Ellenar Ride
... Awesome. Although I must ask why Ripred refers to Gregor as "his" Warrior. And seriously?
"He will live.
Even if I must be there to save his sorry ass."
It's PERFECT!
Seriously.
I mean it.
10Ellenar Ride... Awesome. Although I must ask why Ripred refers to Gregor as "his" Warrior. And seriously?
"He will live.
Even if I must be there to save his sorry ass."
It's PERFECT!
Seriously.
I mean it.
4/2/2012 c3 VotumAstrum
I really, really, really, really, really, really, really love the poetic quality of this story. It is very short and sweet, but it is so good at telling Ripred's story and feelings. I command you to write more. (P.S. I tryied something new! i actually made a serious but neptic review! Am I not awesome:) )
Signed,
Your Ever Insane but Amazing Buddy VotumAstrum:)
I really, really, really, really, really, really, really love the poetic quality of this story. It is very short and sweet, but it is so good at telling Ripred's story and feelings. I command you to write more. (P.S. I tryied something new! i actually made a serious but neptic review! Am I not awesome:) )
Signed,
Your Ever Insane but Amazing Buddy VotumAstrum:)
4/1/2012 c2 10authorEmilyRay
I... don't get this chapter...
Could it possibly have something to do with one of your other fan fictions?
I must go investigate...
Lee
10authorEmilyRayI... don't get this chapter...
Could it possibly have something to do with one of your other fan fictions?
I must go investigate...
Lee
4/1/2012 c1 authorEmilyRay
I love this! You should write more stories in this poem-like style. It was short but you got a lot done! I also enjoyed not seeing a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Congratulations! You are one of the few people on this site who payed attention at least one day in English class.
Please keep writing,
Lee
I love this! You should write more stories in this poem-like style. It was short but you got a lot done! I also enjoyed not seeing a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Congratulations! You are one of the few people on this site who payed attention at least one day in English class.
Please keep writing,
Lee