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10/23/2011 c1 173yume girl 91
Awwwww! D: poor Amon! ne can't help but feel sorry for the guy! Good work :)
10/4/2011 c1 20Mycha
Wow...

What was that saying about self fulfilling prophesies?

I like the way that you intermixed Amon's feelings for his mother and Robin in such a way that it is sometimes a bit confusing as to whom he is talking about. I really like the last couple of sentences where he directly compares his mother to Robin. It tells us everything we need to know about what is going on quite succinctly.

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