for Never Leave10/23/2011 c1
173yume girl 91
Awwwww! D: poor Amon! ne can't help but feel sorry for the guy! Good work :)
173yume girl 91Awwwww! D: poor Amon! ne can't help but feel sorry for the guy! Good work :)
10/4/2011 c1
20Mycha
Wow...
What was that saying about self fulfilling prophesies?
I like the way that you intermixed Amon's feelings for his mother and Robin in such a way that it is sometimes a bit confusing as to whom he is talking about. I really like the last couple of sentences where he directly compares his mother to Robin. It tells us everything we need to know about what is going on quite succinctly.
20MychaWow...
What was that saying about self fulfilling prophesies?
I like the way that you intermixed Amon's feelings for his mother and Robin in such a way that it is sometimes a bit confusing as to whom he is talking about. I really like the last couple of sentences where he directly compares his mother to Robin. It tells us everything we need to know about what is going on quite succinctly.
