for The Sun and Moon2/23 c3 
4Sanna Black Slytherin
Yup Mer, it's gonna be a loooooong night for you. Look forward to sleep xD
4Sanna Black SlytherinYup Mer, it's gonna be a loooooong night for you. Look forward to sleep xD
8/6/2012 c3 1Yuki082
i REALLY liked how you used the moon and the sun. that was truly brilliant and gave a great depth to the story. AND even though arthur accepted everything rather easily, i still think it was good because the evil sorcerer gave him a kinda push so that the quick acceptance was both explained and fit in.
as for inventing a stronger word if your beta is still looking how about superwonderficacious?
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Yuki
1Yuki082i REALLY liked how you used the moon and the sun. that was truly brilliant and gave a great depth to the story. AND even though arthur accepted everything rather easily, i still think it was good because the evil sorcerer gave him a kinda push so that the quick acceptance was both explained and fit in.
as for inventing a stronger word if your beta is still looking how about superwonderficacious?
P
Yuki
1/27/2012 c3 ZAP
Nice job with the poems and sun/moon metaphors - they weren't overdone, were carefully thought out, and they enhanced the story nicely. I like them a lot :D
~ZAP
Nice job with the poems and sun/moon metaphors - they weren't overdone, were carefully thought out, and they enhanced the story nicely. I like them a lot :D
~ZAP
1/3/2012 c3 14dreamydaydreamer
Synonyms for brilliant... superb, awesome, fantastic, awe inspiring, epic, amazing, wonderful, spectacular, fabulous and let's not forget snazzy.
14dreamydaydreamerSynonyms for brilliant... superb, awesome, fantastic, awe inspiring, epic, amazing, wonderful, spectacular, fabulous and let's not forget snazzy.
12/17/2011 c3 2TheBird.and.TheBee
This ends so sweetly, I could kiss you. But I won't because we are strangers.
2TheBird.and.TheBeeThis ends so sweetly, I could kiss you. But I won't because we are strangers.
12/10/2011 c3 19oakleaf
Awesome work.
I'm not sure Arthur would be so accepting, but your story is still really awesome.
Well done!
19oakleafAwesome work.
I'm not sure Arthur would be so accepting, but your story is still really awesome.
Well done!
10/12/2011 c3 Arnia
You-are- BRILLIANT! Love the story! *hugs*
You-are- BRILLIANT! Love the story! *hugs*
10/9/2011 c3 6MamzelleHermy
It was a great ending ^^ ! I loved how Arthur asked Merlin to use magic and how he tried to not scare him more ^^.
Congratulation for the ending !
6MamzelleHermyIt was a great ending ^^ ! I loved how Arthur asked Merlin to use magic and how he tried to not scare him more ^^.
Congratulation for the ending !