for A twist in time7/9/2012 c7 MistressRiruko
Hey, I'm back! Nice chapter :) I liked the description and there where only a few little mistakes. I would suggest writing in paragraphs though. Great chap, though! Update!
Hey, I'm back! Nice chapter :) I liked the description and there where only a few little mistakes. I would suggest writing in paragraphs though. Great chap, though! Update!
7/2/2012 c7 
52KaylaDestroyer
Nice chapter! You did a good job at describing their relief when they finally got a drink. ;) Update soon!
52KaylaDestroyerNice chapter! You did a good job at describing their relief when they finally got a drink. ;) Update soon!
4/8/2012 c1 MistressRiruko
New chappie soon then? Yayz!:D
New chappie soon then? Yayz!:D
4/6/2012 c6 9Angel Lovely Rose
XD ikr? I thought sid locked in a closet and the artie thing would be hilarious! I'm going to update soon!in about less than a week or 2 ill have the nwext chapter ready.i promise! :)
9Angel Lovely RoseXD ikr? I thought sid locked in a closet and the artie thing would be hilarious! I'm going to update soon!in about less than a week or 2 ill have the nwext chapter ready.i promise! :)
4/6/2012 c6 MistressRiruko
An update! *hugs* Yay yay yay ya-
Random person with icy glare:*gives icy glare at me*
Me:*shuts up* Ahem. Loved the chapter! Lol, Sid got locked in the closet...:D *giggles*
Sid:Oh,come on!It was an accident!
Me:And it was funny when Diego ate Artie...well,that's life 4 wild animals anyway :P
Diego: It served the feathered puffball right.
And less errors! :) Apart from some commas right in front of starting sentences and 2 missing words, gr8 story! And try 2 make them a bit longer like u said,as well. :3
Looking 4ward 2 the next chapter! ^^
An update! *hugs* Yay yay yay ya-
Random person with icy glare:*gives icy glare at me*
Me:*shuts up* Ahem. Loved the chapter! Lol, Sid got locked in the closet...:D *giggles*
Sid:Oh,come on!It was an accident!
Me:And it was funny when Diego ate Artie...well,that's life 4 wild animals anyway :P
Diego: It served the feathered puffball right.
And less errors! :) Apart from some commas right in front of starting sentences and 2 missing words, gr8 story! And try 2 make them a bit longer like u said,as well. :3
Looking 4ward 2 the next chapter! ^^
3/26/2012 c6 52KaylaDestroyer
Welcome back! :) Nice chapter! The part qith Artie was funny, and Sid lockibg himself in the closet. Update soon!
52KaylaDestroyerWelcome back! :) Nice chapter! The part qith Artie was funny, and Sid lockibg himself in the closet. Update soon!
3/24/2012 c1 angel rose
Hey it's me princessmiddleast. I'm sorry for not updating in such a looonnnggg time!I been really busy with other stuff.again I'm so sorry about that.BTW I'm gonna change my penname to angel rose
Hey it's me princessmiddleast. I'm sorry for not updating in such a looonnnggg time!I been really busy with other stuff.again I'm so sorry about that.BTW I'm gonna change my penname to angel rose
1/18/2012 c1 MistressRiruko
Um...I don't mean 2 b rude but when r u going 2 update this and the rest of your stories? I'm quite eager 2 find out what happens nxt in your stories, so plz update them soon!:D
Um...I don't mean 2 b rude but when r u going 2 update this and the rest of your stories? I'm quite eager 2 find out what happens nxt in your stories, so plz update them soon!:D
12/13/2011 c3 MewBlueberry
Hiya. Cool idea so far. You said to point out if there were any words missing, well when you said you think you fixed the problem but tell you if there were still any or grammar mistake or whatever. I think there was a missing word when you said, "Princess:Hello my wonderful reviewers!I noticed my computer keeps cutting off the words so I fixed the let me know if you see any grammer mistakes or some words cut off." In between the 'so I fixed the _?_ let me know if you...'
Hiya. Cool idea so far. You said to point out if there were any words missing, well when you said you think you fixed the problem but tell you if there were still any or grammar mistake or whatever. I think there was a missing word when you said, "Princess:Hello my wonderful reviewers!I noticed my computer keeps cutting off the words so I fixed the let me know if you see any grammer mistakes or some words cut off." In between the 'so I fixed the _?_ let me know if you...'
11/14/2011 c5 princessmiddleast
Gotta MistressRiruko! :D
Yep Sid that's ur snoring...
Sid:!
Me:I think he's gonna blow..
Sid:I DON'T SNORE LIKE THAT!GAHHHH!*RUNS into his room and slams the door*
Me:Well...that could have gone better...
Lol.
Gotta MistressRiruko! :D
Yep Sid that's ur snoring...
Sid:!
Me:I think he's gonna blow..
Sid:I DON'T SNORE LIKE THAT!GAHHHH!*RUNS into his room and slams the door*
Me:Well...that could have gone better...
Lol.
11/12/2011 c5 MistressRiruko
This is atually KawaiiKoneko. I'll be called MistressRiruko from now on!^^
Sid, is that your snoring i can hear coming from that recorder over there?
This is atually KawaiiKoneko. I'll be called MistressRiruko from now on!^^
Sid, is that your snoring i can hear coming from that recorder over there?
11/5/2011 c5 princessmiddleseast
*takes out a recorder and plays it and we all here sid's snoring*
And this is not ur snoring?
*takes out a recorder and plays it and we all here sid's snoring*
And this is not ur snoring?
11/4/2011 c5 Princessmiddleast
Lol! She's right Sid you do snore loud!
Lol! She's right Sid you do snore loud!
11/3/2011 c5 KawaiiKoneko
Nice chappie! And lol, Sid u snore like a big loud pig.
Sid: Do not!
Yeah u do,u should hear yourself. Update plz!
Nice chappie! And lol, Sid u snore like a big loud pig.
Sid: Do not!
Yeah u do,u should hear yourself. Update plz!
11/3/2011 c5 9Angel Lovely Rose
thx for everyone who reviewed. :D out of all the stories on fanfiction this one seems to be my best one ever!
KayalaDestoryer,thx so much for reviewing every chap. i post!i'm glad to see u enjoying this story.
MewPainappuru:IKR?Sid is awsome!He's my fav. charector in ice age as well :D
9Angel Lovely Rosethx for everyone who reviewed. :D out of all the stories on fanfiction this one seems to be my best one ever!
KayalaDestoryer,thx so much for reviewing every chap. i post!i'm glad to see u enjoying this story.
MewPainappuru:IKR?Sid is awsome!He's my fav. charector in ice age as well :D