for Family Ties6/20/2012 c3 
1The Dark Madness Dragon
hey, this is one of the best story's i have ever read, you are awesome at story's.
1The Dark Madness Dragonhey, this is one of the best story's i have ever read, you are awesome at story's.
4/10/2012 c7 7Fenrir Connell
Hey there! Sorry is this review seems kind of rushed, but I promised and I am willing to keep my promise!
So... What to say for a new review... Have I already told you before how good this story is? Lets begin with that: Your story is so great! You manage to make it even more hooking with every chapter. I think what you do is something I'll never be able to accomplish as an author! I'll keep trying, though... You are my idol, Star!
There was no grammar or spelling mistakes that I could spot. So there goes another perfect rating for your writing.
A whole chapter through Spyro's POV. It was really nice, and so many things happened, I can almost feel his rage burning inside of me! In four words: You Are A Master.
I'm glad I got the time to read this. I really knew in the depths of my heart that you would not disappoint me, you just continue to improve this Fanfiction Masterpiece with every chapter.
When I grow up, I want to be like you. LoL
Anyway, I've kept my word. Now, I'll see if I get some time later to read "Lived To Fight Another Day", can you believe it was me who told you to post it and that I still haven't found time to read it? I'm a pity...
But I promise I will do it! I'd better forget about that blog post for a while. too busy.
Ok, that was all for now!
- Fenrir
7Fenrir ConnellHey there! Sorry is this review seems kind of rushed, but I promised and I am willing to keep my promise!
So... What to say for a new review... Have I already told you before how good this story is? Lets begin with that: Your story is so great! You manage to make it even more hooking with every chapter. I think what you do is something I'll never be able to accomplish as an author! I'll keep trying, though... You are my idol, Star!
There was no grammar or spelling mistakes that I could spot. So there goes another perfect rating for your writing.
A whole chapter through Spyro's POV. It was really nice, and so many things happened, I can almost feel his rage burning inside of me! In four words: You Are A Master.
I'm glad I got the time to read this. I really knew in the depths of my heart that you would not disappoint me, you just continue to improve this Fanfiction Masterpiece with every chapter.
When I grow up, I want to be like you. LoL
Anyway, I've kept my word. Now, I'll see if I get some time later to read "Lived To Fight Another Day", can you believe it was me who told you to post it and that I still haven't found time to read it? I'm a pity...
But I promise I will do it! I'd better forget about that blog post for a while. too busy.
Ok, that was all for now!
- Fenrir
4/8/2012 c7 Guest
don't kill cynder or i will curse you and yourfamily will turn into zombies make cynder and flash be held hostage sincerely curse remember ok sincerly deta
don't kill cynder or i will curse you and yourfamily will turn into zombies make cynder and flash be held hostage sincerely curse remember ok sincerly deta
4/6/2012 c1 7Belitinog
So in your Fanfiction Spyro and Cynder have family that's nice I like that. But you are kind of original I'll give you that. It must be hard for Spyro in your fanfiction after his daughter died.
I abmit that sounds better then what I plan to do. But in a way you pass on the name and I like that. Every generation passes to the next. Or something like that. I like Flash and Frosty. I always like Brother and Sister characters.
Well that's all I have for now but I will continue reading your stories I seem to like them.
7BelitinogSo in your Fanfiction Spyro and Cynder have family that's nice I like that. But you are kind of original I'll give you that. It must be hard for Spyro in your fanfiction after his daughter died.
I abmit that sounds better then what I plan to do. But in a way you pass on the name and I like that. Every generation passes to the next. Or something like that. I like Flash and Frosty. I always like Brother and Sister characters.
Well that's all I have for now but I will continue reading your stories I seem to like them.
3/28/2012 c6 2SPYRO the purple savior
wow... good story but I have a question are you going to kill FROSTY too i hope not spyros going to kill any golem he finds wow I BET YOUR GOING TO KILL FROSTY TOO and MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER...LOL
2SPYRO the purple saviorwow... good story but I have a question are you going to kill FROSTY too i hope not spyros going to kill any golem he finds wow I BET YOUR GOING TO KILL FROSTY TOO and MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER...LOL
3/8/2012 c6 adimeralkirk
Ok I did forget about the story but recognized the name. Its good so far except for your spelling sometimes and as u said your killing everyone fast, I really hope u stop but whatevers good for you keep writing look forward to more
Ok I did forget about the story but recognized the name. Its good so far except for your spelling sometimes and as u said your killing everyone fast, I really hope u stop but whatevers good for you keep writing look forward to more
3/7/2012 c6 7Fenrir Connell
Oh Come on! How comes Spyrofan777 always gets to be the first review! Ha ha ha!
That is just fine, sometimes I'm a little busy.
Anyway, we've finally got an update! It has been a while after all. To begin with, I'd like to tell I'm happy to know your life is doing great, and that you are living it with excitement. There are many of us around who can't really say our lives are that interesting... Mostly a routine, or simply not interesting. I'm really happy for you!
Now, going straight to the story, I could spot two mistakes. First of all you added a comma where it didn't belong, in the middle of a word. I can't remember where right now, tough. If you have some time to check out that, you'll have to look for it. Also, there was one single tense mistake.
Enough with the mistakes! (I have no more to number...)I just keep falling in love with your main writing style. It really gets deep into me and makes me enjoy reading every word! Also, the story is looking interesting this far, it may be true that you are rushing into the... Well, the killing. But if it is going to be a pain to keep writing, you are right, you should better try to finish the story as fast as you can.
To be crushed by a Golem... Poor Flash. But still, I'm starting to get the things you spoke about in the summary.
This story is awesome!
Ok, it has been a while... I hope we get to speak sometime soon. I really appreciate you because of all the support you've given me since the very beginning.
The story is amazing, keep it up!
The wait doesn't really matter, Fanfiction can wait for the great stories like this one to come.
"Lived To Fight Another Day"? I never heard of that... It probably is something you wrote before my arrival here, isn't it? I so definitely would like to read that... Here is an idea if you are willing to post it here: "Why don't you post all those +-70 pages, but you separate them as chapters? Since the story is already written, you could post a weekly chapter or something like that."
If you are not going to post it... Would it be too botherful if I asked you to send it to me somehow?... Ok, sorry to be such a stubborn, but you really called my attention with that... Is it a story for Spyro?
*Self-Slap*
Fine, I don't want to bother you too much... So, as I said, Hope we speak soon!
- Fenrir
7Fenrir ConnellOh Come on! How comes Spyrofan777 always gets to be the first review! Ha ha ha!
That is just fine, sometimes I'm a little busy.
Anyway, we've finally got an update! It has been a while after all. To begin with, I'd like to tell I'm happy to know your life is doing great, and that you are living it with excitement. There are many of us around who can't really say our lives are that interesting... Mostly a routine, or simply not interesting. I'm really happy for you!
Now, going straight to the story, I could spot two mistakes. First of all you added a comma where it didn't belong, in the middle of a word. I can't remember where right now, tough. If you have some time to check out that, you'll have to look for it. Also, there was one single tense mistake.
Enough with the mistakes! (I have no more to number...)I just keep falling in love with your main writing style. It really gets deep into me and makes me enjoy reading every word! Also, the story is looking interesting this far, it may be true that you are rushing into the... Well, the killing. But if it is going to be a pain to keep writing, you are right, you should better try to finish the story as fast as you can.
To be crushed by a Golem... Poor Flash. But still, I'm starting to get the things you spoke about in the summary.
This story is awesome!
Ok, it has been a while... I hope we get to speak sometime soon. I really appreciate you because of all the support you've given me since the very beginning.
The story is amazing, keep it up!
The wait doesn't really matter, Fanfiction can wait for the great stories like this one to come.
"Lived To Fight Another Day"? I never heard of that... It probably is something you wrote before my arrival here, isn't it? I so definitely would like to read that... Here is an idea if you are willing to post it here: "Why don't you post all those +-70 pages, but you separate them as chapters? Since the story is already written, you could post a weekly chapter or something like that."
If you are not going to post it... Would it be too botherful if I asked you to send it to me somehow?... Ok, sorry to be such a stubborn, but you really called my attention with that... Is it a story for Spyro?
*Self-Slap*
Fine, I don't want to bother you too much... So, as I said, Hope we speak soon!
- Fenrir
3/7/2012 c6 6Spyrofan777
...
Awesomeness... So much good writing!
I'M SO GLAD YOUR BACK! *tears of joy*
6Spyrofan777...
Awesomeness... So much good writing!
I'M SO GLAD YOUR BACK! *tears of joy*
11/4/2011 c5 7Fenrir Connell
Sadness... I cannot describe my feeling any other way... I wonder what will come out next.
Poor Cynder... She was so caring... Anyway, that its how life is sometimes.
Wonderful story. I hope you get something soon, unlike me... I've had a serious loss of motivation this last days. But that its just another topic.
Thanks for the good stuff to read.
Your fan, officially.
- Fenrir
7Fenrir ConnellSadness... I cannot describe my feeling any other way... I wonder what will come out next.
Poor Cynder... She was so caring... Anyway, that its how life is sometimes.
Wonderful story. I hope you get something soon, unlike me... I've had a serious loss of motivation this last days. But that its just another topic.
Thanks for the good stuff to read.
Your fan, officially.
- Fenrir
10/31/2011 c4 7Fenrir Connell
I'm glad things SEEM to be right with Blush, oh no! Poor Flash! What has he gotten himself into?
Star, you are a master on what you do. I just love your writing, and the story is going awesome! Absolutely breathtaking.
May I say, I do think I found a few grammar mistakes and words that you could have replaced by others, but you can understand it. If you REALLY need to know them, I may send them to you via private message, even thought I think is fine...
Well, keep it up like this, is one of the greatest things I've read.
- Fenrir
7Fenrir ConnellI'm glad things SEEM to be right with Blush, oh no! Poor Flash! What has he gotten himself into?
Star, you are a master on what you do. I just love your writing, and the story is going awesome! Absolutely breathtaking.
May I say, I do think I found a few grammar mistakes and words that you could have replaced by others, but you can understand it. If you REALLY need to know them, I may send them to you via private message, even thought I think is fine...
Well, keep it up like this, is one of the greatest things I've read.
- Fenrir
10/31/2011 c4 6Spyrofan777
You are a mistress of suspense. I bow to you, milady. *deep bow*
I hope for more soon!
6Spyrofan777You are a mistress of suspense. I bow to you, milady. *deep bow*
I hope for more soon!