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26loveislouder94
There are so many little details that I love about this! For instance, James and Fred finishing each others sentences just like Fred and George used to do, and the current generations reactions to their future's. I can imagine Ron being so oblivious that it'd have to be pointed out to him that Hermione is the mother of his children. Nice work!
26loveislouder94There are so many little details that I love about this! For instance, James and Fred finishing each others sentences just like Fred and George used to do, and the current generations reactions to their future's. I can imagine Ron being so oblivious that it'd have to be pointed out to him that Hermione is the mother of his children. Nice work!
5/20 c3 loveislouder94
I like your creation of a prank rating scale, and that it corresponds to each Weasley child. I've never read anything like it before, and I think it's quite clever.
The detail about phoenix tears was interesting too. This story is coming along well, I look forward to reading the rest... :)
I like your creation of a prank rating scale, and that it corresponds to each Weasley child. I've never read anything like it before, and I think it's quite clever.
The detail about phoenix tears was interesting too. This story is coming along well, I look forward to reading the rest... :)
5/20 c1 loveislouder94
An interesting beginning. I like the little details that make Teddy like his parents, like him wanting to become a teacher like Remus, and being clumsy like Tonks. You establish his relationship with the Potter family quite well here too. Nicely done :)
An interesting beginning. I like the little details that make Teddy like his parents, like him wanting to become a teacher like Remus, and being clumsy like Tonks. You establish his relationship with the Potter family quite well here too. Nicely done :)
5/19 c1
1Lara1221
I don't know if ice said before how much I love this. But I do.'so please keep it up.'irs amazing. All the charactes and every single chapter is well thought out. Can't wait for more :)
1Lara1221I don't know if ice said before how much I love this. But I do.'so please keep it up.'irs amazing. All the charactes and every single chapter is well thought out. Can't wait for more :)
5/18 c30 Guest
Can't wait for next chapter
Can't wait for next chapter
5/16 c30 Madlenita
I really hope for next chapter soon!
I really hope for next chapter soon!
5/16 c28 Madlenita
So this last scene is after Percy met his daughters? Thanks for this chapter...
So this last scene is after Percy met his daughters? Thanks for this chapter...
5/16 c27 Madlenita
Tonks is amazing ;-)
Tonks is amazing ;-)
5/16 c26 MAdlenita
Well, i wondered how Percy will survive metting with his kids ;-)
Well, i wondered how Percy will survive metting with his kids ;-)
5/16 c25 Madlenita
Well, i was hope for Narciss to have her memories, it would help to change future... But i guess Lord Voldemort could then get to know this memories and it would be bad...
Well, i was hope for Narciss to have her memories, it would help to change future... But i guess Lord Voldemort could then get to know this memories and it would be bad...
5/16 c24 Madlenita
Ok, Sirius was/is totally insane... And this story with Remus ;-)
Thanks for this chapter...
Ok, Sirius was/is totally insane... And this story with Remus ;-)
Thanks for this chapter...
