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5/20 c7 26loveislouder94
There are so many little details that I love about this! For instance, James and Fred finishing each others sentences just like Fred and George used to do, and the current generations reactions to their future's. I can imagine Ron being so oblivious that it'd have to be pointed out to him that Hermione is the mother of his children. Nice work!
5/20 c3 loveislouder94
I like your creation of a prank rating scale, and that it corresponds to each Weasley child. I've never read anything like it before, and I think it's quite clever.
The detail about phoenix tears was interesting too. This story is coming along well, I look forward to reading the rest... :)
5/20 c1 loveislouder94
An interesting beginning. I like the little details that make Teddy like his parents, like him wanting to become a teacher like Remus, and being clumsy like Tonks. You establish his relationship with the Potter family quite well here too. Nicely done :)
5/19 c1 1Lara1221
I don't know if ice said before how much I love this. But I do.'so please keep it up.'irs amazing. All the charactes and every single chapter is well thought out. Can't wait for more :)
5/19 c30 1elijahlover
I love it the chapter before this one made me sob! U evil brilliant writer xx
5/18 c30 Guest
Can't wait for next chapter
5/16 c30 Madlenita
I really hope for next chapter soon!
5/16 c28 Madlenita
So this last scene is after Percy met his daughters? Thanks for this chapter...
5/16 c27 Madlenita
Tonks is amazing ;-)
5/16 c26 MAdlenita
Well, i wondered how Percy will survive metting with his kids ;-)
5/16 c25 Madlenita
Well, i was hope for Narciss to have her memories, it would help to change future... But i guess Lord Voldemort could then get to know this memories and it would be bad...
5/16 c24 Madlenita
Ok, Sirius was/is totally insane... And this story with Remus ;-)
Thanks for this chapter...
5/15 c4 Madlenita
Ah, Mad-Eye is himself... And Severus reaction in this, amazing...
5/15 c3 Madlenita
What a ending...
5/15 c2 Madlenita
So ALbus can't walk to James room? And amazing chapter...
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