for Lying Eyes11/15/2011 c1 
3ExtraJuicy
I loved it, simple and tasteful. I could never imagine Varric not being able to talk to beautiful women, he's far too suave, but you made it fit his character for the story nicely. As soon as I get out of work I'm going to read it again and perhaps add to this review, but alas I'm running late. Thank you for the fabulous Varric-centric piece, this and your most appreciated review of my story made my break during a 16hr work day much better. :)
3ExtraJuicyI loved it, simple and tasteful. I could never imagine Varric not being able to talk to beautiful women, he's far too suave, but you made it fit his character for the story nicely. As soon as I get out of work I'm going to read it again and perhaps add to this review, but alas I'm running late. Thank you for the fabulous Varric-centric piece, this and your most appreciated review of my story made my break during a 16hr work day much better. :)
11/4/2011 c1 Hikari Yuukino
I like how the characters were well captured and the intensity of that kiss. I could feel it and that's something some authors ruin for me. Thank you, you made it real!
I like how the characters were well captured and the intensity of that kiss. I could feel it and that's something some authors ruin for me. Thank you, you made it real!
10/19/2011 c1 1SuperJessicaa
Very good oneshot you have here. You portrayed both Hawke and Varric's personalities well. I wish there were more stories about Varric like this one. C:
1SuperJessicaaVery good oneshot you have here. You portrayed both Hawke and Varric's personalities well. I wish there were more stories about Varric like this one. C:
10/12/2011 c1 41Shenandoah76209
Lovely story. I enjoy the thought that Varric has to teach Hawke how to lie. Varric is one of my favorite characters and I always thought it was a shame that you can't romance him.
41Shenandoah76209Lovely story. I enjoy the thought that Varric has to teach Hawke how to lie. Varric is one of my favorite characters and I always thought it was a shame that you can't romance him.
10/7/2011 c1 1Cibiripilli
Wow that's cute..and funny..and so much Varric! I really can picture them in my mind the way you write it! Thank You!
1CibiripilliWow that's cute..and funny..and so much Varric! I really can picture them in my mind the way you write it! Thank You!