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10/7/2011 c1 11BeBopALula
I love this! It's so dark and nightmarish, and it has this really scary claustrophobic quality. You really got into his point-of-view.
10/7/2011 c1 13Miss Annabel Lenore Ragg
I absolutely loved this. I really like your writing style. The dialect you used to tell the story really brings it to life; as apposed to using conventional grammar and usage. The imaginary used throughout the story was marvelous. I found this very enjoyable to read. There are not a lot of fan fictions about Beadle Bamford out there, so kudos to you creating one which is so well crafted. I also love the fact that you alluded to a Rasputina song in the title. (Which is the reason I decided to read this. I was listening to aforementioned song as I was reading the story, as well.)

Love, bloody crumpets and little priest pies;

Miss Ragg

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