for Pure12/4/2011 c2 
35Runner043
Glad your story is taking on the topic of where Kono's ohana was when she was in trouble. Chin tried, but there was nothing from either Steve or Danny. Nothing.
35Runner043Glad your story is taking on the topic of where Kono's ohana was when she was in trouble. Chin tried, but there was nothing from either Steve or Danny. Nothing.
11/2/2011 c5 36francis2
That was really a very good AU episode with the snippets you had. It adressed all the problems of Kono being all alone. You even managed to make Lori into a good character, which the show hasn't yet.
36francis2That was really a very good AU episode with the snippets you had. It adressed all the problems of Kono being all alone. You even managed to make Lori into a good character, which the show hasn't yet.
10/17/2011 c5 2IslandGem
A lovely way to finish off a wonderfully crafted piece zebraboymom! Thank you for your fan fic. Loved that Danno and Chin put money on them LOL. Like you lot, I am hoping that the writers get their er..stuff together soon with the Kono storyline. Perhaps you could offer your services to write for them if they don't get it right? :) Cheers!
2IslandGemA lovely way to finish off a wonderfully crafted piece zebraboymom! Thank you for your fan fic. Loved that Danno and Chin put money on them LOL. Like you lot, I am hoping that the writers get their er..stuff together soon with the Kono storyline. Perhaps you could offer your services to write for them if they don't get it right? :) Cheers!
10/17/2011 c5 28VampFan539
I have decided that if I had any magical powers I would make you one of the head writers for this show. :D This is how I wish the ep from tonight would of ended. Good job
28VampFan539I have decided that if I had any magical powers I would make you one of the head writers for this show. :D This is how I wish the ep from tonight would of ended. Good job
10/17/2011 c5 1TZEJForever
I just finished watching the new episode and I'm rewatching it again, but I have to say that I love your version way better. However, I wish there was more to this one. I'm off to read some more of your stories and hope to see more stories from you.
1TZEJForeverI just finished watching the new episode and I'm rewatching it again, but I have to say that I love your version way better. However, I wish there was more to this one. I'm off to read some more of your stories and hope to see more stories from you.
10/17/2011 c5 bushy4
BRILLANT! love it.
can't the writers take a hint!
let's cross our fingers for tonight.
hey i still have you...
BRILLANT! love it.
can't the writers take a hint!
let's cross our fingers for tonight.
hey i still have you...
10/17/2011 c5 Froggie2
Awwwww...loved it! A little fluff is always good and knowing what's to come on tonight's espisode...I'll take this anyday:-) Thank you for the quick update. I'd love to see something like this on the show too...if not this season...someday down the road :-)
Awwwww...loved it! A little fluff is always good and knowing what's to come on tonight's espisode...I'll take this anyday:-) Thank you for the quick update. I'd love to see something like this on the show too...if not this season...someday down the road :-)
10/17/2011 c4 4Foxy527
Awww, I love it. I'm so anxious for tonight's episode and to see how things unfold that I can barely stand it. This may help get me through the day. :) I like the way you've portrayed things here!
4Foxy527Awww, I love it. I'm so anxious for tonight's episode and to see how things unfold that I can barely stand it. This may help get me through the day. :) I like the way you've portrayed things here!
10/16/2011 c4 sphekie
This chapter is good. Why can't I see this on tv instead of Steve not worry about kono at all. :( No fair! :(
Glad to Steve and kono show their feeling and caring for each other. I luv this! :)
This chapter is good. Why can't I see this on tv instead of Steve not worry about kono at all. :( No fair! :(
Glad to Steve and kono show their feeling and caring for each other. I luv this! :)
10/16/2011 c4 bushy4
oh yeah!
you never fail me... this was awesome.
please write for the show because they are really disappointing me.
i love all your stories.
amazing!
oh yeah!
you never fail me... this was awesome.
please write for the show because they are really disappointing me.
i love all your stories.
amazing!
10/15/2011 c3 8bookworm45
I'm glad Steve's doing what he can to make everything right. And I really hope that your theory is correct and she's only undercover.
8bookworm45I'm glad Steve's doing what he can to make everything right. And I really hope that your theory is correct and she's only undercover.