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6Fluff-is-awesome
Best part was when you said that if Fred couldn't do it he wouldn't either. That's really what it comes down to for me. And the screams. That's what leaves me with aching pains in my chest. I wouldn't blame him if he screamed like that for the rest of his life. Actually if he screamed for the rest of his life I would be left quite satisfied. It is unacceptable for one to go without the other. It just doesn't happen. I call it torture worse than death. The kid doesn't deserve that!
6Fluff-is-awesomeBest part was when you said that if Fred couldn't do it he wouldn't either. That's really what it comes down to for me. And the screams. That's what leaves me with aching pains in my chest. I wouldn't blame him if he screamed like that for the rest of his life. Actually if he screamed for the rest of his life I would be left quite satisfied. It is unacceptable for one to go without the other. It just doesn't happen. I call it torture worse than death. The kid doesn't deserve that!
5/6/2012 c1 Dracosnapeslytherin
Omfg! I cried too! I always cry when it comes to Fred and George . Either way, AMAZING JOB!
Omfg! I cried too! I always cry when it comes to Fred and George . Either way, AMAZING JOB!
4/24/2012 c1 2tipowath
From a purely technical standpoint, it helps to start a new line after you've written dialogue. Also, there should be a comma at the end of a line of dialogue but before the attribution; for example, '"Fred," I whispered' instead of '"Fred" I whispered'.
Little details like that aside, I enjoyed this fic. I love your Molly- even when she's at her most concerned she's still herself. I also appreciate that George doesn't go through the five steps neatly, instead lapsing back and forth. Thanks for sharing this fic, I enjoyed reading it.
2tipowathFrom a purely technical standpoint, it helps to start a new line after you've written dialogue. Also, there should be a comma at the end of a line of dialogue but before the attribution; for example, '"Fred," I whispered' instead of '"Fred" I whispered'.
Little details like that aside, I enjoyed this fic. I love your Molly- even when she's at her most concerned she's still herself. I also appreciate that George doesn't go through the five steps neatly, instead lapsing back and forth. Thanks for sharing this fic, I enjoyed reading it.
1/20/2012 c1 43JilyEvotter19
Tears came thick and fast in my eyes while I was reading this. Well done.
43JilyEvotter19Tears came thick and fast in my eyes while I was reading this. Well done.
12/30/2011 c1 40alohamora080
Beautiful.Utterly beautiful. I'mnot even sure if I'm typing porperly because myt ears are practically blinding me.
40alohamora080Beautiful.Utterly beautiful. I'mnot even sure if I'm typing porperly because myt ears are practically blinding me.
12/18/2011 c1 Cool777
That is absolutley FABULOUS! If you like my harry potter spoof comment it
That is absolutley FABULOUS! If you like my harry potter spoof comment it
12/18/2011 c1 Starwars01
You are a really good writer-you should write a book-seriously!Keep on writing you have a talent for it!
You are a really good writer-you should write a book-seriously!Keep on writing you have a talent for it!
12/18/2011 c1 Shayarox
you have some freaky writing abilities there
you have some freaky writing abilities there
11/4/2011 c1 Kelsey
I truly cried during this... so touching... FRED we miss you. But great story
I truly cried during this... so touching... FRED we miss you. But great story