for Quietus5/21 c33 
3EinIgriV
Hi,
It has been a long time since I've read a fanfiction with such an important plot-story. Of course, I'm joining in the following process to keep up the next chapters! I'm writing this review to tell you how much I've enjoyed reading those 33 chapters in a week straight! I've cut through sleep and social life for this... It was almost a relief to catch up the last chapter.
What I did enjoy the most about this story is how much you put weight on the original caracters' behaviour. This review is really awfully cheap. I meant it when I say it is a wonderfully well structured story, with endless turnovers and lovely characters.
Also, I really enjoyed reading this story for the writing quality. I am currently trying hard to improve my english level and I've learned so many descriptive words. I've read some in english before, but yours was the one which gave me the hardest work!
So, I am eagerly waiting the next chapter!
Great work.
3EinIgriVHi,
It has been a long time since I've read a fanfiction with such an important plot-story. Of course, I'm joining in the following process to keep up the next chapters! I'm writing this review to tell you how much I've enjoyed reading those 33 chapters in a week straight! I've cut through sleep and social life for this... It was almost a relief to catch up the last chapter.
What I did enjoy the most about this story is how much you put weight on the original caracters' behaviour. This review is really awfully cheap. I meant it when I say it is a wonderfully well structured story, with endless turnovers and lovely characters.
Also, I really enjoyed reading this story for the writing quality. I am currently trying hard to improve my english level and I've learned so many descriptive words. I've read some in english before, but yours was the one which gave me the hardest work!
So, I am eagerly waiting the next chapter!
Great work.
5/20 c33 anonymous
Please make more chapters! if I could I would beg you on my hands and knees just so you would make more chapters for this wonderful piece of literature, but seriously this story is fantastic! Please continue it!
Sincerely,
Anonymous
Please make more chapters! if I could I would beg you on my hands and knees just so you would make more chapters for this wonderful piece of literature, but seriously this story is fantastic! Please continue it!
Sincerely,
Anonymous
5/19 c2 lili
Argh! Amazing!
I love your Sasuke :3
Argh! Amazing!
I love your Sasuke :3
5/19 c1 lili
Oh! Interesting!
Oh! Interesting!
5/18 c1 Sasusaku fan
Oh my god! Your fanfic its awesomee :) I just finish to read the whole story and ... I get a little bit sad that isnt finish yet :( thats why i prefer to read complete fanfics :/ but this story its totally worth it to wait :D pleaseee update Soon and i have a question for you ; what its your sign of the zodiac ?
Oh my god! Your fanfic its awesomee :) I just finish to read the whole story and ... I get a little bit sad that isnt finish yet :( thats why i prefer to read complete fanfics :/ but this story its totally worth it to wait :D pleaseee update Soon and i have a question for you ; what its your sign of the zodiac ?
5/16 c33 Ssanderei
Chap32: YOOHOO THEIR LIPS TOUCHED! But sadly, Sasuke had been knocked out by unbearable pain inflicted on his head... What an action-packed fic indeed! XD Is the phial's content Sak's blood? If it weren't then why Tsunade is sooo determined to retrieve it. She had even tapped her power into use even it has been strictly forbidden to do so. *cross fingers* I think the answers to my queries are just around the corner...waiting to surprise me! :)
Kabuto, you freak! You are so driven with your selfish desires to be known and to have utmost power. /le sigh/ But I must say that Orochimarou's evil deeds are not in par with what you did. You still have time to turn your back against him. Change before it's too late. /le sigh/
This is it authornim...the drama, unveiling of secrets and whatnot are just starting. Yepey! After days of reading the pervious chappies, I finally reached this latest chapter. I guess it's my turn to be directed by the spotlight of patience.
I believe in you authornim! XD Things do happen at the right time. I'll be patiently waiting for you to update. Fighting! /le raise fist/ In every chapter you make, there's always a ticking bomb ready to explode. I better prepare myself for another bomb that awaits me in the next chappie. Wow! I am happy to know that you're making your own novel. :) /throws confetti/
Take care of your health authornim. God bless always...and we, your lovely readers, *conceited much? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ* will be here for you.
Haengsho! (Be Happy!)
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
Chap32: YOOHOO THEIR LIPS TOUCHED! But sadly, Sasuke had been knocked out by unbearable pain inflicted on his head... What an action-packed fic indeed! XD Is the phial's content Sak's blood? If it weren't then why Tsunade is sooo determined to retrieve it. She had even tapped her power into use even it has been strictly forbidden to do so. *cross fingers* I think the answers to my queries are just around the corner...waiting to surprise me! :)
Kabuto, you freak! You are so driven with your selfish desires to be known and to have utmost power. /le sigh/ But I must say that Orochimarou's evil deeds are not in par with what you did. You still have time to turn your back against him. Change before it's too late. /le sigh/
This is it authornim...the drama, unveiling of secrets and whatnot are just starting. Yepey! After days of reading the pervious chappies, I finally reached this latest chapter. I guess it's my turn to be directed by the spotlight of patience.
I believe in you authornim! XD Things do happen at the right time. I'll be patiently waiting for you to update. Fighting! /le raise fist/ In every chapter you make, there's always a ticking bomb ready to explode. I better prepare myself for another bomb that awaits me in the next chappie. Wow! I am happy to know that you're making your own novel. :) /throws confetti/
Take care of your health authornim. God bless always...and we, your lovely readers, *conceited much? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ* will be here for you.
Haengsho! (Be Happy!)
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
5/16 c32 Ssanderei
Chap31: You got me there authornim! XD I thought the Hesperides know Sak's real identity by calling her "Kore"...it turns out I am wrong because the name itself means "maiden". ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ.
Kyaaaaaa! Prince Alarming turned into a Prince Charming...finally! Sasuke defended Sak with all his might. :) It's crystal clear that Sak is already someone dear to Sasuke. He may never express it to words but his actions prove it all. SasuSaku love is what I need right now! XD
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
Chap31: You got me there authornim! XD I thought the Hesperides know Sak's real identity by calling her "Kore"...it turns out I am wrong because the name itself means "maiden". ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ.
Kyaaaaaa! Prince Alarming turned into a Prince Charming...finally! Sasuke defended Sak with all his might. :) It's crystal clear that Sak is already someone dear to Sasuke. He may never express it to words but his actions prove it all. SasuSaku love is what I need right now! XD
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
5/15 c31 Ssanderei
Chap30: Give me some authornim! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ Oh my golly! This chappie just made my heart fluttered over and over again. XD This review is not enough to contain the things I'm so wanted to say after reading this chapter. Sasuke is obviously lowering his guards without him fully acknowledging it to himself. He had even told her his family name...his father's gift to his mother...and allowed her to enter heaven! THAT WAS A MARVELOUS CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!
I can't sustain the excitement that surging through my veins! When the moment comes that they realize how deeply in love they are with each other...IT WILL BE A BLAST! MY OVARIES WILL BURST OUT...LANDING ANYWHERE! XD Surely, I'll be elated...*sigh...when that time comes...so before it happens I better prime myself. *winks *winks
THANK U SOOO MUCH authornim for pampering us, your readers. Those music are great symphonies that made us feel like we were just there with them...witnessing everything as they unfold before our very eyes.
Huhuhu...Quietus is really a must read fic...ever! I so love it! Huhuhuhu...TTTT
Excuse me as I cry myself at this corner WAHHHHHHHH!
With hugs and kisses...and puffy eyes,
Ssanderei/Edherei
Chap30: Give me some authornim! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ Oh my golly! This chappie just made my heart fluttered over and over again. XD This review is not enough to contain the things I'm so wanted to say after reading this chapter. Sasuke is obviously lowering his guards without him fully acknowledging it to himself. He had even told her his family name...his father's gift to his mother...and allowed her to enter heaven! THAT WAS A MARVELOUS CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!
I can't sustain the excitement that surging through my veins! When the moment comes that they realize how deeply in love they are with each other...IT WILL BE A BLAST! MY OVARIES WILL BURST OUT...LANDING ANYWHERE! XD Surely, I'll be elated...*sigh...when that time comes...so before it happens I better prime myself. *winks *winks
THANK U SOOO MUCH authornim for pampering us, your readers. Those music are great symphonies that made us feel like we were just there with them...witnessing everything as they unfold before our very eyes.
Huhuhu...Quietus is really a must read fic...ever! I so love it! Huhuhuhu...TTTT
Excuse me as I cry myself at this corner WAHHHHHHHH!
With hugs and kisses...and puffy eyes,
Ssanderei/Edherei
5/15 c30 Ssanderei
Chap29: Now who are you calling Prince Alarming Sak? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ She's totally enchanted with Sasuke without him taking a use of magical spell and whatnot. :) Sasuke is undeniably a handsome god...a very seductive, temptous god. XD I am not containing my mind with not so innocent thoughts...yay! I just admire and love Sasuke's enigmatic aura.
Sakura is sooo alluring with that dress (hmmm...i'm using my imaginative prowess...ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ), thus, Sasuke had drawn to her more. Please take a glimpse of the way he looked at her, he looked at her like was some sort of a delectable treat. XD
And I was right about my hunch of Naruto having suspicion on the real whereabouts of Sak. Sasuke, oh golly! You were already caught! Poor Sai, he have to accept those hurtful words and insults Naruto had spat to him...
Talking about the dance? WAHHHHHH! Such a cute, spazztastic moment! Gonna engrave it to my long "most unforgettable Quietus's moments" list! I am still not recovered yet. Teehee...
Sasuke... O_O Cat got my tongue with what you did. *winks *winks The dance...the kiss! You're truly the god! THIS CHAPTER JUST FRIED MY BRAIN!
I THINK MY BRAIN ISN'T GOING TO BE INTACT ANY LONGER BY NEXT CHAPPIE! I LOVE YAH AUTHORNIM! _
#ALWAYS_SASUSAKU
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
Chap29: Now who are you calling Prince Alarming Sak? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ She's totally enchanted with Sasuke without him taking a use of magical spell and whatnot. :) Sasuke is undeniably a handsome god...a very seductive, temptous god. XD I am not containing my mind with not so innocent thoughts...yay! I just admire and love Sasuke's enigmatic aura.
Sakura is sooo alluring with that dress (hmmm...i'm using my imaginative prowess...ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ), thus, Sasuke had drawn to her more. Please take a glimpse of the way he looked at her, he looked at her like was some sort of a delectable treat. XD
And I was right about my hunch of Naruto having suspicion on the real whereabouts of Sak. Sasuke, oh golly! You were already caught! Poor Sai, he have to accept those hurtful words and insults Naruto had spat to him...
Talking about the dance? WAHHHHHH! Such a cute, spazztastic moment! Gonna engrave it to my long "most unforgettable Quietus's moments" list! I am still not recovered yet. Teehee...
Sasuke... O_O Cat got my tongue with what you did. *winks *winks The dance...the kiss! You're truly the god! THIS CHAPTER JUST FRIED MY BRAIN!
I THINK MY BRAIN ISN'T GOING TO BE INTACT ANY LONGER BY NEXT CHAPPIE! I LOVE YAH AUTHORNIM! _
#ALWAYS_SASUSAKU
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
5/15 c29 Ssanderei
Chap28: Thank you sooo much goddess Chiyo for meddling! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ Sasuke, the Death, deserves it after all...he had been despised and feared a lot of times already. I think it's about time that he finds his own happiness thru the Spring, Sakura...XD Everyone deserves happiness even the Death deity.
Omo! Naruto's having a gist of Sak's captor perhaps?! Who's Sak's father all along? Yikes! My head is also bombarded with seemingly endless questions.
What will happen in the next chappie?! Omo! Omo! Omo! I AM ZUUUPPER EXCITED!
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
Chap28: Thank you sooo much goddess Chiyo for meddling! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ Sasuke, the Death, deserves it after all...he had been despised and feared a lot of times already. I think it's about time that he finds his own happiness thru the Spring, Sakura...XD Everyone deserves happiness even the Death deity.
Omo! Naruto's having a gist of Sak's captor perhaps?! Who's Sak's father all along? Yikes! My head is also bombarded with seemingly endless questions.
What will happen in the next chappie?! Omo! Omo! Omo! I AM ZUUUPPER EXCITED!
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
5/15 c28 Ssanderei
Chap27: Authornim I don't mind the complexity you put in this story... Why would I complain? It's getting more excited and unpredictable! Not only that, the secrets in the past are slowly being unravelled. So Madara is the one residing in the sky. Hmmm...
Sak's drunken state was pretty hilarious!ㅋㅋㅋ She had definitely made a scene! XD Her, sitting on Sasuke's lap is definitely loved! :) Good job Sasuke for not taking advantage! And I think I have an idea who is that handsome fellow she is referring to.
Naruto... I really love how you still believe in Sasuke...in the bond that you both shared before. Kakashi just have to be an intruder...tsk3! Naruto is already in the brink of telling Sasuke about who is the essence of the spring. That got me thinking...what really happened between Kore and Hades? Speaking of Hades...omo! Sasuke heard his old name being uttered by Sak...KYAAAAA! What will happen next? Ottoke! XD
With hugs and kisses...and overwhelming excitement,
Ssanderei/Edherei
Chap27: Authornim I don't mind the complexity you put in this story... Why would I complain? It's getting more excited and unpredictable! Not only that, the secrets in the past are slowly being unravelled. So Madara is the one residing in the sky. Hmmm...
Sak's drunken state was pretty hilarious!ㅋㅋㅋ She had definitely made a scene! XD Her, sitting on Sasuke's lap is definitely loved! :) Good job Sasuke for not taking advantage! And I think I have an idea who is that handsome fellow she is referring to.
Naruto... I really love how you still believe in Sasuke...in the bond that you both shared before. Kakashi just have to be an intruder...tsk3! Naruto is already in the brink of telling Sasuke about who is the essence of the spring. That got me thinking...what really happened between Kore and Hades? Speaking of Hades...omo! Sasuke heard his old name being uttered by Sak...KYAAAAA! What will happen next? Ottoke! XD
With hugs and kisses...and overwhelming excitement,
Ssanderei/Edherei
5/15 c1 anonymous
just wanted to know...since i REALLY WEALLY WEALLY LIKE THIS...why did you decide to name this fnfic "Quietus" ?
Just wondering... :D
just wanted to know...since i REALLY WEALLY WEALLY LIKE THIS...why did you decide to name this fnfic "Quietus" ?
Just wondering... :D
5/15 c27 Ssanderei
Chap26: THAT WAS SOOO CLOSE! XD It's happening so fast! The gift...the confrontation...and the almost first kiss! Wahhhh! I am going gaga over here! Sasuke and Sak are really the opposite! Reading the flashback had put emphasis on how Sak is the exact opposite of the Death deity even before the occurrence of the massacre. XD Life vs Death. Sakura vs Sasuke. Isn't it romantic? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ IT REALLY DOES!
I AM SOOO ELATED! GONNA READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE!
Hmmm...Sasuke and Naruto having a conversation after a looooong time? That's exciting! .
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
Chap26: THAT WAS SOOO CLOSE! XD It's happening so fast! The gift...the confrontation...and the almost first kiss! Wahhhh! I am going gaga over here! Sasuke and Sak are really the opposite! Reading the flashback had put emphasis on how Sak is the exact opposite of the Death deity even before the occurrence of the massacre. XD Life vs Death. Sakura vs Sasuke. Isn't it romantic? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ IT REALLY DOES!
I AM SOOO ELATED! GONNA READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE!
Hmmm...Sasuke and Naruto having a conversation after a looooong time? That's exciting! .
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
5/15 c26 Ssanderei
Chap25: WAAHHHHH! SASUKE BRUSHED HIS LIPS ON SAK'S CHEEK...*NOSEBLEED FOSEIWHOSISHOAJIDUJHOOSI THAT'S ME SWEARING
Tsk3...Sasuke's plan had backfired to him. *sigh Getting close proximity to her Sasuke has never been a good plan in the first place. Finally, Sak starts to understand the situation she is in more. She's not taking it calmly. -_- Poor Sak...it must have been hard for her to take it all in. Despite the fact that her abductor is nothing less...what the fudge! He's a freakin' deity for Tartarus's sake! That only proves that Sak doesn't rely on the visual aspect solely... Sasuke, you better make a nicer move...now. :)
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
Chap25: WAAHHHHH! SASUKE BRUSHED HIS LIPS ON SAK'S CHEEK...*NOSEBLEED FOSEIWHOSISHOAJIDUJHOOSI THAT'S ME SWEARING
Tsk3...Sasuke's plan had backfired to him. *sigh Getting close proximity to her Sasuke has never been a good plan in the first place. Finally, Sak starts to understand the situation she is in more. She's not taking it calmly. -_- Poor Sak...it must have been hard for her to take it all in. Despite the fact that her abductor is nothing less...what the fudge! He's a freakin' deity for Tartarus's sake! That only proves that Sak doesn't rely on the visual aspect solely... Sasuke, you better make a nicer move...now. :)
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
5/15 c25 Ssanderei
Chap24: Visiting a magical forest and a jewelled cave with the ever handsome deity...tsk3...SAK MANY MORTAL LASSIES ENVY YOU RIGHT NOW! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Oh my Chiyo helped! I think she decided to help Sasuke because she knew about Sak's identity perhaps? :) Sasuke going inside Sak's room then seeing her in a not so conservative outfit were totally unexpected. Sasuke's burning gazes aren't go unnoticed. Teehee... Every time their eyes meet, there's really a sparkling feeling/emotion behind them. XD
Your readers are really pampered...more SasuSaku moments in every chapter. Well, I am not complaining! :) And finally I had made a new account in deviantart since I had really forgotten my first one. I am sooo happy because I'd finally followed you there and the Quietus group, too. Love love love for this fic! .
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei
Chap24: Visiting a magical forest and a jewelled cave with the ever handsome deity...tsk3...SAK MANY MORTAL LASSIES ENVY YOU RIGHT NOW! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Oh my Chiyo helped! I think she decided to help Sasuke because she knew about Sak's identity perhaps? :) Sasuke going inside Sak's room then seeing her in a not so conservative outfit were totally unexpected. Sasuke's burning gazes aren't go unnoticed. Teehee... Every time their eyes meet, there's really a sparkling feeling/emotion behind them. XD
Your readers are really pampered...more SasuSaku moments in every chapter. Well, I am not complaining! :) And finally I had made a new account in deviantart since I had really forgotten my first one. I am sooo happy because I'd finally followed you there and the Quietus group, too. Love love love for this fic! .
With hugs and kisses,
Ssanderei/Edherei