for The Second Pair3/18 c12 
7Shiki105
I am tearing up.
This was beautifully written. I loved every moment of it. The style kind of grew on me too, I suppose. All in all, time well spent xD
I wish you luck on all your future projects!
Shiki
7Shiki105I am tearing up.
This was beautifully written. I loved every moment of it. The style kind of grew on me too, I suppose. All in all, time well spent xD
I wish you luck on all your future projects!
Shiki
3/18 c11 Shiki105
Lol collect the plot-bunnies while you can! Provides some inspiration for writer's block, I guess.
Aaaaaaah, last chapter! I always dread final chapters, I don't know why.
Lol collect the plot-bunnies while you can! Provides some inspiration for writer's block, I guess.
Aaaaaaah, last chapter! I always dread final chapters, I don't know why.
3/18 c8 Shiki105
Ooh, how cryptic!
I wonder how this story would have been if you'd tried to write it out in the usual format? But then, I must admit that writing...(which century?) wizarding Britain would be quite difficult.
...Still, it'd have been nice, I guess xD
All the best!
Shiki
Ooh, how cryptic!
I wonder how this story would have been if you'd tried to write it out in the usual format? But then, I must admit that writing...(which century?) wizarding Britain would be quite difficult.
...Still, it'd have been nice, I guess xD
All the best!
Shiki
3/18 c7 Shiki105
Awww, so sad! :'(
Seriously, nothing more to say than that xD I just wanted to continue giving you my support because I like this story!
All the best!
Shiki
Awww, so sad! :'(
Seriously, nothing more to say than that xD I just wanted to continue giving you my support because I like this story!
All the best!
Shiki
3/18 c6 Shiki105
Time skips are only ever indicated by dialogue - as is everything else. Lol pointing out the obvious here but this is heavily dependent upon dialogue. I'm not sure I completely agree with that style of writing, but then, I also feel that it fits the structure of this story really well. The scenes are short and succinct so there's no time for lengthy narrative. I've never tried it myself, and as I've said before, I've never read other stories like this, so it seems quite awkward, I guess. Nevertheless, I like the story _
Happy writing!
Shiki
Time skips are only ever indicated by dialogue - as is everything else. Lol pointing out the obvious here but this is heavily dependent upon dialogue. I'm not sure I completely agree with that style of writing, but then, I also feel that it fits the structure of this story really well. The scenes are short and succinct so there's no time for lengthy narrative. I've never tried it myself, and as I've said before, I've never read other stories like this, so it seems quite awkward, I guess. Nevertheless, I like the story _
Happy writing!
Shiki
3/18 c4 Shiki105
You're doing great! It's just that people tend not to read stories that aren't...I dunno, larger pieces? More...flowing pieces, if that makes sense? I just checked this story to pass the time but I'm glad I did. It's not your standard story format but it's still pretty good. Sometimes, I guess people don't want to try out new things - and I must confess, I am normally one of those people :(
Anyways, happy writing!
Shiki
You're doing great! It's just that people tend not to read stories that aren't...I dunno, larger pieces? More...flowing pieces, if that makes sense? I just checked this story to pass the time but I'm glad I did. It's not your standard story format but it's still pretty good. Sometimes, I guess people don't want to try out new things - and I must confess, I am normally one of those people :(
Anyways, happy writing!
Shiki
3/18 c3 Shiki105
Awww, so sweet! But Helga seems kind of a martyr; she gives more to the friendship than 's how it looks to me, anyway.
Brilliant writing, as usual!
Happy writing!
Shiki
Awww, so sweet! But Helga seems kind of a martyr; she gives more to the friendship than 's how it looks to me, anyway.
Brilliant writing, as usual!
Happy writing!
Shiki
3/18 c1 Shiki105
I checked it out because I thought the summary was truly sweet. And I'm kind of obsessed with fics that are about friendship xD
Your writing is brilliant, as per usual! I just felt glad that the Founders weren't speaking like the youth of today (some fics are truly...unbelievable). Great work! It's not the usual kind of thing I'd read but I'll give it a go!
Happy writing!
Shiki
I checked it out because I thought the summary was truly sweet. And I'm kind of obsessed with fics that are about friendship xD
Your writing is brilliant, as per usual! I just felt glad that the Founders weren't speaking like the youth of today (some fics are truly...unbelievable). Great work! It's not the usual kind of thing I'd read but I'll give it a go!
Happy writing!
Shiki
1/13 c2 FallenStar22
Helga's last line in VII is amazing.
It is honestly incredible how you've portrayed such an intense relationship in so few words.
Helga's last line in VII is amazing.
It is honestly incredible how you've portrayed such an intense relationship in so few words.
11/29/2012 c4 94Loonaticslover13
This is perfectly brilliant. So, Morgana, Helena, and Godric II. A fine trio of gifted children, if I do say so myself.
94Loonaticslover13This is perfectly brilliant. So, Morgana, Helena, and Godric II. A fine trio of gifted children, if I do say so myself.
5/16/2012 c12 23PoppyPotter
I read this whole fic yesterday and I absolutely loved it! I was really interested in Helena and Rowenas relationship after the books but I haven't even attempted writing a founders era fic- it's too daunting for me! But you wrote it perfectly- all the characters and plot were completely believable and I love the style of your writing :)
23PoppyPotterI read this whole fic yesterday and I absolutely loved it! I was really interested in Helena and Rowenas relationship after the books but I haven't even attempted writing a founders era fic- it's too daunting for me! But you wrote it perfectly- all the characters and plot were completely believable and I love the style of your writing :)