for Rick Castle, Paranormal Espionage Investigator1/29 c1 nire47
I like the start of this. Sure hope you find that muse and continue w this story. Castle and especially Fringe are one of the tv shows that I really love to watch.
I like the start of this. Sure hope you find that muse and continue w this story. Castle and especially Fringe are one of the tv shows that I really love to watch.
11/20/2012 c1 
2Pliffy
I like this story, and it would be interesting to see how castle and Frigne work with each other, since the show Castle the characters don't seem to like the FBI, and you know Kate
has an ex boyfriend that's an FBI agent, so mayba you could say Olivia, Phillip and Charlie had seen him from time to time, but if you don't like him can you please avoid character bashing?
2PliffyI like this story, and it would be interesting to see how castle and Frigne work with each other, since the show Castle the characters don't seem to like the FBI, and you know Kate
has an ex boyfriend that's an FBI agent, so mayba you could say Olivia, Phillip and Charlie had seen him from time to time, but if you don't like him can you please avoid character bashing?
7/5/2012 c1 3FabianH
I love the irony of Castle's guesses.
And the Star Trek references.
And I'm really looking forward to the "more chapters" you seem to have promised ;)
3FabianHI love the irony of Castle's guesses.
And the Star Trek references.
And I'm really looking forward to the "more chapters" you seem to have promised ;)
5/22/2012 c1 24ameliagianna
OMGOMGOMG
I love it!
Fringe and Castle are my obsessions. This is a perfect combo of the two.
PLEASE POST MORE!
24ameliagiannaOMGOMGOMG
I love it!
Fringe and Castle are my obsessions. This is a perfect combo of the two.
PLEASE POST MORE!
12/12/2011 c1 58Cerulean.Phoenix7
Now we're talking. Fringe and Castle and a case that has Castle referencing the best sci-fi clssics? You've got my attention :)
I love how you write the relationship between Castle and Beckett; Castle makes some of the greatest references and Beckett always has the best responses (plus references to both Star Wars and Star Trek in one chapter? Awesomeness :3). I only wish that we could have actually seen that moment where Beckett had snapped at Castle, I feel like I missed a little character moment there.
I love that Castle seems to be foreshadowing things, so to speak. His ideas of alternate universes and shapeshifters are just so awesome because as Fringe fans, we know that something along those lines just has to be involved in this (plus there's amber in this. Walternate's name might as well be all over it).
You have Castle's character nailed and I absolutely love it. The dialogue in this story is great, I would just say give us a little more description. Such as when you write that Beckett was 'more confused than ever' - maybe give us a little more explanation as to why. The best thing for any author to do is to show, not to tell.
Great job with Olivia's entrance at the ending there. I feel like she may not have introduced herself in those exact words (but this is me being a picky Fringe fan XP).
I really like what you've given us in this opening chapter and I look forward to more. I'm really excited to see what happens when Beckett and Castle meet Peter and Walter for the first time. Also, I'm interested to see how you incorporate Chuck into this. While I haven't watched the show in a few years it'll be interesting to see how you fit that into this storyline.
CP7
58Cerulean.Phoenix7Now we're talking. Fringe and Castle and a case that has Castle referencing the best sci-fi clssics? You've got my attention :)
I love how you write the relationship between Castle and Beckett; Castle makes some of the greatest references and Beckett always has the best responses (plus references to both Star Wars and Star Trek in one chapter? Awesomeness :3). I only wish that we could have actually seen that moment where Beckett had snapped at Castle, I feel like I missed a little character moment there.
I love that Castle seems to be foreshadowing things, so to speak. His ideas of alternate universes and shapeshifters are just so awesome because as Fringe fans, we know that something along those lines just has to be involved in this (plus there's amber in this. Walternate's name might as well be all over it).
You have Castle's character nailed and I absolutely love it. The dialogue in this story is great, I would just say give us a little more description. Such as when you write that Beckett was 'more confused than ever' - maybe give us a little more explanation as to why. The best thing for any author to do is to show, not to tell.
Great job with Olivia's entrance at the ending there. I feel like she may not have introduced herself in those exact words (but this is me being a picky Fringe fan XP).
I really like what you've given us in this opening chapter and I look forward to more. I'm really excited to see what happens when Beckett and Castle meet Peter and Walter for the first time. Also, I'm interested to see how you incorporate Chuck into this. While I haven't watched the show in a few years it'll be interesting to see how you fit that into this storyline.
CP7
11/9/2011 c1 Dorkette
I'm pretty much in love with your brain good sir. I honestly hope to the powers that be that I can marry it. Yes, I just quoted national treasure's Riley Poole.
This fic is seriously awesome! When the blond made an appearance I cheered (inwardly).
Love all of Castle's guesses (Alternate universe! Shapeshifters! Amber!) and the squee worthy banter between castle and Beckett.
Again, awesome work good sir!
PS: castle has a thing for blondes. Just sayin'
I'm pretty much in love with your brain good sir. I honestly hope to the powers that be that I can marry it. Yes, I just quoted national treasure's Riley Poole.
This fic is seriously awesome! When the blond made an appearance I cheered (inwardly).
Love all of Castle's guesses (Alternate universe! Shapeshifters! Amber!) and the squee worthy banter between castle and Beckett.
Again, awesome work good sir!
PS: castle has a thing for blondes. Just sayin'
11/6/2011 c1 1Raven Grace
I really like it! I can't wait to see how Olivia will handle this, and how Beckett and co will react to all of this. Hope you will update again soon!
1Raven GraceI really like it! I can't wait to see how Olivia will handle this, and how Beckett and co will react to all of this. Hope you will update again soon!
10/14/2011 c1 1procrastinadian
I like the start, even though it is a crossover using the whole first chapter to setup the Castle side before introducing anything else is a nice touch. Looking forward to more.
1procrastinadianI like the start, even though it is a crossover using the whole first chapter to setup the Castle side before introducing anything else is a nice touch. Looking forward to more.
10/10/2011 c1 9Crumby
Ha! You killed Brandonate! Hihi, awesome!
Or is it Brandon, and Brandonate has infiltrated Massive Dynamic?
This is going to be fun. So many characters! Curious to see them all interacting together. And you've got great interactions going on already between the Castle's characters.
What took Olivia so long, though? Broyles wasn't very reactive on this one! ;-)
I'm really looking forward to this fic, see how the characters and shows intersect (!), and where the story goes. Can't wait! :)
Oh and, are we gonna see Farrah Walker? Man, this is scary!
(Side note: you gave an extra "e" to Nina Sharp, if I'm not mistaken.)
9CrumbyHa! You killed Brandonate! Hihi, awesome!
Or is it Brandon, and Brandonate has infiltrated Massive Dynamic?
This is going to be fun. So many characters! Curious to see them all interacting together. And you've got great interactions going on already between the Castle's characters.
What took Olivia so long, though? Broyles wasn't very reactive on this one! ;-)
I'm really looking forward to this fic, see how the characters and shows intersect (!), and where the story goes. Can't wait! :)
Oh and, are we gonna see Farrah Walker? Man, this is scary!
(Side note: you gave an extra "e" to Nina Sharp, if I'm not mistaken.)
10/10/2011 c1 36Frea O'Scanlin
Thanks to the worms I installed on your computer, I was able to read this story as you wrote it, but that doesn't make the final product any less awesome. ;)
Thank you so much for my birthday present. I know you don't write fic much anymore, but the fact that you took time out of your busy life to write this for little old me just fills me with an absurd sort of "I can make my minions do anything!" glee. (not really. I really love this story) I canNOT wait to see how Kate Beckett and Olivia Dunham interact, as Kate is kind of the less repressed and geekier version of Olivia anyway.
The thing I love here, though, is the interaction between the characters. If I'm right, and I'm always right, there'll be at least...eleven different characters bouncing around from three major shows, plus the majorest character of them all, Gene. You are a brave, brave man to take on that amount of personality, but if there's one person that can do it, it's totally you. Or somebody with multiple personality disorder. I like you better, though.
Again, thank you so SO SO much for my awesome birthday present! And even more, thank you for killing Alt Brandon. Dude tried to cut my girlfriend's skull open. He had it coming.
36Frea O'ScanlinThanks to the worms I installed on your computer, I was able to read this story as you wrote it, but that doesn't make the final product any less awesome. ;)
Thank you so much for my birthday present. I know you don't write fic much anymore, but the fact that you took time out of your busy life to write this for little old me just fills me with an absurd sort of "I can make my minions do anything!" glee. (not really. I really love this story) I canNOT wait to see how Kate Beckett and Olivia Dunham interact, as Kate is kind of the less repressed and geekier version of Olivia anyway.
The thing I love here, though, is the interaction between the characters. If I'm right, and I'm always right, there'll be at least...eleven different characters bouncing around from three major shows, plus the majorest character of them all, Gene. You are a brave, brave man to take on that amount of personality, but if there's one person that can do it, it's totally you. Or somebody with multiple personality disorder. I like you better, though.
Again, thank you so SO SO much for my awesome birthday present! And even more, thank you for killing Alt Brandon. Dude tried to cut my girlfriend's skull open. He had it coming.
10/9/2011 c1 13hhooppyy
So Chuck will be joining up in this fic at some point? Will definitely be interesting to see how you fit them in.
Poor Brandon...why did you have to encase him in Amber?
That discussion about the amber sounds so familiar to a conversation I had on twitter about what to call the new opening credits for this season.
I love that you mixed Castle's penchant for outlandish theories with what we know as truth on Fringe.
Okay, is the Brandon in the amber Bradon or AltBrandon or some other version all together? I am assuming Alt at the moment, but I wouldn't put it past Nina to present the Alt in his place for questioning.
I would love to see where you are taking this story...so far it is pretty interesting.
13hhooppyySo Chuck will be joining up in this fic at some point? Will definitely be interesting to see how you fit them in.
Poor Brandon...why did you have to encase him in Amber?
That discussion about the amber sounds so familiar to a conversation I had on twitter about what to call the new opening credits for this season.
I love that you mixed Castle's penchant for outlandish theories with what we know as truth on Fringe.
Okay, is the Brandon in the amber Bradon or AltBrandon or some other version all together? I am assuming Alt at the moment, but I wouldn't put it past Nina to present the Alt in his place for questioning.
I would love to see where you are taking this story...so far it is pretty interesting.