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3/31 c14 Msteine23
I Love this story. I miss this show so much it was one of the best shows on USA. Keep Going
3/8 c14 BrittanyLS
I love that Mary is there for him!
2/24 c14 79jekkah
"You said, he knows I love him despite everything…There's no despite." He corrected. - I adore this line

Poor Marshall. He's just breaking my heart. Love that he was worried that Mary might not be there to take care of him.
2/5 c14 JJ2008
Thanks for the update! Poor Marshall, but loved that he wanted Mary to stay...please update soon.
2/5 c14 29JMS529
Like Seth willing to give up his career to help Marshall. It shows more than he's been able to say to his son. Actions do speak louder then words. Felt bad for Stan being unsure of how to act around Marshall. Have a feeling Eleanor will help him out. The ending was sweet with Marshall wanting Mary to help and her promising to be there. Looking forward to the next part.
11/19/2012 c13 79jekkah
Peace out, Raph. I never like you as much as I do when you're walking away.

AWWWWWWWWW: "I hope he's worth all this."

"He is." Mary insisted. "It's the one thing I am sure of."

Love the Rachel/Mary talk.

It's hard to read Marshall like that. He has a lot of recovering to do.

Double-awwwwww: "Well, you're the most beautiful thing, I've ever seen."
11/19/2012 c13 JJ2008
Great chapter! Glad Mary admitted her feelings to Ralph...looking forward to the next chapter:)
11/18/2012 c13 BrittanyLS
Glad Mary has less to worry about with Raph knowing how she feels!
11/16/2012 c13 29JMS529
Glad Mary admitted her feeling to Raph and telling Marshall's mom. Liked Marshall's cheat sheet and how he remembered Mary. Looking forward to the next part.
10/23/2012 c12 BrittanyLS
Wow, what a place to end the chapter! I was thrilled for Mary, and then it ends! Please update soon!
10/22/2012 c12 JJ2008
Go Shelley! Loved how she made Mary think. So sweet that Marshall was agitated that Mary was not there with him:). Anxiously awaiting more, please update soon.
10/21/2012 c12 79jekkah
SHELLEY! I love, adore Shelley! She should be in all fics! (except mine 'cause I can't write that smart)

The conversation between Mary and Shelley was fantastic, especially when they were discussing whether or not Mary loves Marshall and why she can't find out if she does. That's a get insight into Mary that I haven't seen around here.

And of course, I love that Marshall needed Mary whether or not he remembers her. Awwwww!
10/19/2012 c12 29JMS529
I so like Shelley and Mary's conversation and how Shelley tells her they both know how she feels. Love that Marshall was looking for Mary and his parents had to stress it to get her to realize what they were saying. Looking forward to the next part.
9/20/2012 c11 79jekkah
Ooh, Seth being the one to calm Marshall down is all kinds of awesome! I like that little twist.

Oh, that last paragraph is a killer! I just wanna hug Mary.
9/18/2012 c11 JJ2008
Excellent! Loved Mary's keepsakes and how Marshall looked to his father for comfort. Can't wait for more, please update soon!
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