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12/26/2011 c1 24Stainless Steel Fox
Thank heavens, a story that doesn't have Celestia as an evil supervillian or tortured soul, just a nice character piece, showing her as she is in the series.

It was a very nicely written, well thought out idea, and I loved the characterisation of the guard. I did wonder what could hurt Celestia, short of a direct hit by the Death Star. But this makes sense, and far more than the 'ohh, Celestia obviousdly has Luna locled up in a dungeon, despite the fact that the one time we've seen her tear up is when her sister was returned to her.'

Sorry, that always pushes my buttons. As I said, great story. I look forward to more.
11/21/2011 c1 BLALALA
Good writing, although the story seems sort of... Bland?
10/15/2011 c1 24RK-Striker-JK-5
Not bad, here. Good take on Celestia, too. I like that guard.
10/13/2011 c1 3Zervziel
This was a pretty good read. I like the idea of the sisters sparring for sport for some reason. Though I will say the guard pony is way to verbose in her speaking in the beginning of the story.

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