for The Jovian Senshi2/12 c22 Mr. Unknown
Great! - A word that describes this story perfectly.
Keep up the good work!
Great! - A word that describes this story perfectly.
Keep up the good work!
11/15/2012 c22 Happyreader
Woow, yeah, this story was great X3 it could even be called history?Xd i guess yep, your writting is so pro, you should even write books, they would be better than most crap is being produced actually ;D keep the good job and never leave your imagination withers ok?D
Woow, yeah, this story was great X3 it could even be called history?Xd i guess yep, your writting is so pro, you should even write books, they would be better than most crap is being produced actually ;D keep the good job and never leave your imagination withers ok?D
7/8/2012 c22 
15Eclipse of Thunder
I freaking loved it! It was amazing, what you did with the story. You write very well! I look forward to your other stories!
15Eclipse of ThunderI freaking loved it! It was amazing, what you did with the story. You write very well! I look forward to your other stories!
3/31/2012 c22 inori
i really enjoyed reading your fic(glad that yours is long...there seems to be few long fics about Makoto)^^
looking forward for its sequel...hoping you'll write more stories focusing on Jupiter^^
i really enjoyed reading your fic(glad that yours is long...there seems to be few long fics about Makoto)^^
looking forward for its sequel...hoping you'll write more stories focusing on Jupiter^^
1/15/2012 c22 4Fatal Mars
EPIC! I loved this coming of age fic! This is how SM should have went down. Mako was a **ing G and the end made me sooooo frustrated. I wanted to cry for Jupi when Usagi killed herself. I could feel the devastation and hopelessness that she must have felt. The way you told the tale was beautiful and poetic. It was enough of everything to keep me satisfied.
4Fatal MarsEPIC! I loved this coming of age fic! This is how SM should have went down. Mako was a **ing G and the end made me sooooo frustrated. I wanted to cry for Jupi when Usagi killed herself. I could feel the devastation and hopelessness that she must have felt. The way you told the tale was beautiful and poetic. It was enough of everything to keep me satisfied.
1/3/2012 c22 dittoeevee8888
I enjoyed it [and mostly because of the fact that it wasn't heavily focused on romance, like much of the other stories on FF are, so it was definitely a refreshing story].
However...the epilogue confuses me. Like...I don't understand why it's really there :/
I understand it's a view of the future/"now", but it kind of seemed random the first time I read it. I'd like to know why you put it there though, if you do respond to reviews =D
I enjoyed it [and mostly because of the fact that it wasn't heavily focused on romance, like much of the other stories on FF are, so it was definitely a refreshing story].
However...the epilogue confuses me. Like...I don't understand why it's really there :/
I understand it's a view of the future/"now", but it kind of seemed random the first time I read it. I'd like to know why you put it there though, if you do respond to reviews =D
12/26/2011 c22 4PSVT
I have to commend you for a pretty amazing story, one that I contained both action and emotion in spades and conveyed both aspects in a brilliant manner. Your portrayal of a strong, and yet in some ways quite vulnerable, Makoto was the cornerstone of it all, as the ability to see not just her external dialogue but her thoughts was important for fully understanding the story. I liked that she was not just another princess but a queen among princess, and yet she continued to hold her duty of protecting Serenity as sacred, even to the very end. You did an excellent job of creating a compelling and unique storyline, one that absolutely held my attention from beginning to end, and you did so with very few mistakes in the more technical aspects of writing. Thus, this story of yours certainly is one of my favorites, and I thank you so much for creating it.
4PSVTI have to commend you for a pretty amazing story, one that I contained both action and emotion in spades and conveyed both aspects in a brilliant manner. Your portrayal of a strong, and yet in some ways quite vulnerable, Makoto was the cornerstone of it all, as the ability to see not just her external dialogue but her thoughts was important for fully understanding the story. I liked that she was not just another princess but a queen among princess, and yet she continued to hold her duty of protecting Serenity as sacred, even to the very end. You did an excellent job of creating a compelling and unique storyline, one that absolutely held my attention from beginning to end, and you did so with very few mistakes in the more technical aspects of writing. Thus, this story of yours certainly is one of my favorites, and I thank you so much for creating it.
12/23/2011 c22 7Moonlight Pheonix
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
Unless you were unalerted from the chanting, I thought it was absolutely amazing.
7Moonlight PheonixSequel! Sequel! Sequel!
Unless you were unalerted from the chanting, I thought it was absolutely amazing.
12/23/2011 c22 4balbriggansmith
Excuse me but could you do a what if story in which tey make to pluto and end up in the future with the modern senshi.
I just love time paradoxes and this epic story
Even if you don't, keep up the awesome stories man
4balbriggansmithExcuse me but could you do a what if story in which tey make to pluto and end up in the future with the modern senshi.
I just love time paradoxes and this epic story
Even if you don't, keep up the awesome stories man
12/22/2011 c22 Sailor Ayame
Ohhhhhh , I loved how Hotaru appeared . Exactly how I imagined it . Shes so awesome . Anyway , you do a really good job describing battles . It felt like I was watching it right there on the field . I loved how you incorparated Makoto and everyone in Crystal Tokyo . I hope that you continue to write about Makoto , she has become one of my favorite characters now . Anyway , Im rambling on . But , cant wait to see what else you have in store for us ! Im def a fan . 3
Ohhhhhh , I loved how Hotaru appeared . Exactly how I imagined it . Shes so awesome . Anyway , you do a really good job describing battles . It felt like I was watching it right there on the field . I loved how you incorparated Makoto and everyone in Crystal Tokyo . I hope that you continue to write about Makoto , she has become one of my favorite characters now . Anyway , Im rambling on . But , cant wait to see what else you have in store for us ! Im def a fan . 3
12/22/2011 c22 KeiomeMO
Wow... Amazing... So strong, yet she still managed to break my heart a bit with all the anguish she went through. Thank you so much for sharing. It has been my pleasure to read.
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Wow... Amazing... So strong, yet she still managed to break my heart a bit with all the anguish she went through. Thank you so much for sharing. It has been my pleasure to read.
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12/21/2011 c22 4Silent Arrow
Oh wow. Just... wow. Incredible finale, and an absolutely fantastic way of wrapping up the whole story. I truly enjoyed the ride you took us on!
4Silent ArrowOh wow. Just... wow. Incredible finale, and an absolutely fantastic way of wrapping up the whole story. I truly enjoyed the ride you took us on!
12/20/2011 c20 Sailor Ayame
20 chapter of pure awesomeness . I cant wait to see the outcome of their battle . Makoto is strong and Im excited that she still wants to fight . Poor Ami , I know shes having the hardest time understanding this . Anyway , Im pretty pumped about the next chapter and I hope Makoto demolishes Neph . Ahaha .
20 chapter of pure awesomeness . I cant wait to see the outcome of their battle . Makoto is strong and Im excited that she still wants to fight . Poor Ami , I know shes having the hardest time understanding this . Anyway , Im pretty pumped about the next chapter and I hope Makoto demolishes Neph . Ahaha .
12/20/2011 c20 4Silent Arrow
Update soon, I beg you! I'm sure I can speak for many, saying that we can't wait to see what happens next! Go jupiter go!
4Silent ArrowUpdate soon, I beg you! I'm sure I can speak for many, saying that we can't wait to see what happens next! Go jupiter go!