for A Witch in Glee5/15/2012 c1 
17Nispedana
HAHAHA. Oh gosh I even laughed at the frigging DISCLAIMER!And this is interesting. Fairies and Vampires? Winx and Glee? hehehe.
*Folds sleeves*
Now off to R&R the next chap!
17NispedanaHAHAHA. Oh gosh I even laughed at the frigging DISCLAIMER!And this is interesting. Fairies and Vampires? Winx and Glee? hehehe.
*Folds sleeves*
Now off to R&R the next chap!
5/9/2012 c1 37Whiitewolf
First of all. The disclaimed was very clever!
As for the writing, as always a fantastic job. I expect nothing less from you and you don't disappoint. You once again show a great flow in your words. You express detail, and imagery without trying too hard.
Another great piece by you!
37WhiitewolfFirst of all. The disclaimed was very clever!
As for the writing, as always a fantastic job. I expect nothing less from you and you don't disappoint. You once again show a great flow in your words. You express detail, and imagery without trying too hard.
Another great piece by you!
5/9/2012 c1 6OldStoneface
This was just plain wicked fun. I would not have imagined I could get into a Glee/Wynx crossover, but you are doing just that. Well done! I especially liked "uber-geek glory". LOL. Awesome...
6OldStonefaceThis was just plain wicked fun. I would not have imagined I could get into a Glee/Wynx crossover, but you are doing just that. Well done! I especially liked "uber-geek glory". LOL. Awesome...
5/9/2012 c1 11Sinnii
Well, admittedly, I'm not all that fond of Winx Club, and I know nothing about Glee, so I cannot rightfully comment on things like characterization and dialogue.
However, from a technical standpoint, this was well written. It was easy to read, easy to follow, easy to (somewhat) imagine. I didn't notice any typos, or any related errors which is pretty good to me... since I tend to be terrible with typos.
11SinniiWell, admittedly, I'm not all that fond of Winx Club, and I know nothing about Glee, so I cannot rightfully comment on things like characterization and dialogue.
However, from a technical standpoint, this was well written. It was easy to read, easy to follow, easy to (somewhat) imagine. I didn't notice any typos, or any related errors which is pretty good to me... since I tend to be terrible with typos.
3/13/2012 c1 9Dzuljeta
Hey :
As, naturally, I am not quite familiar with the characters, I have neither the right nor the wish to say something negative!
My impression from what I've read (forgive me, I did not read it in its fullness, you know why) is positive. What I noticed first is that you mostly concentrate on dialogs and action. It's good. Absolutely not the way I write, but it's interesting.
Keep up the good work :)
9DzuljetaHey :
As, naturally, I am not quite familiar with the characters, I have neither the right nor the wish to say something negative!
My impression from what I've read (forgive me, I did not read it in its fullness, you know why) is positive. What I noticed first is that you mostly concentrate on dialogs and action. It's good. Absolutely not the way I write, but it's interesting.
Keep up the good work :)
2/11/2012 c16 51rogue-scholar07
Whoo-hoo! A happy ending for Tina/Melanie and Umbra, very well executed. I'm sad to see this end, but anxious for the sequel.
51rogue-scholar07Whoo-hoo! A happy ending for Tina/Melanie and Umbra, very well executed. I'm sad to see this end, but anxious for the sequel.
2/7/2012 c15 51rogue-scholar07
The story's almost over? That kinda makes me sad. Do you have a sequel planned out, or are you wanting to leave this as a stand-alone?
Either way, I like this update. Its nice to see magical beings taking a united stand on something.
51rogue-scholar07The story's almost over? That kinda makes me sad. Do you have a sequel planned out, or are you wanting to leave this as a stand-alone?
Either way, I like this update. Its nice to see magical beings taking a united stand on something.
2/3/2012 c14 rogue-scholar07
Yay! New chapter! Loved the way this one played out. You write battle scenes better than I do, I think. Granted, yours are shorter... still, great work on this chapter, Akela!
Yay! New chapter! Loved the way this one played out. You write battle scenes better than I do, I think. Granted, yours are shorter... still, great work on this chapter, Akela!
1/28/2012 c13 rogue-scholar07
Yay! A new chapter! I'm tap-dancing with excitement!
Awesome battle scene. Must have seemed like a pain to write, but it turned out great. You're really doing a wonderful job with this story, Akela!
Yay! A new chapter! I'm tap-dancing with excitement!
Awesome battle scene. Must have seemed like a pain to write, but it turned out great. You're really doing a wonderful job with this story, Akela!
1/1/2012 c12 rogue-scholar07
Wow! So much action all in one chapter. A great start to the new year, and a wonderfully written piece of fanfiction! I can almost visualize the look on Jesse's face... :D
Wow! So much action all in one chapter. A great start to the new year, and a wonderfully written piece of fanfiction! I can almost visualize the look on Jesse's face... :D
12/24/2011 c11 rogue-scholar07
You just made my Christmas even better, Akela! I love the idea of Musa sponsoring the group going to Nationals. Bet Rachel could learn a thing or two from her, eh? And Tina getting the scepter *whistles*, that's a nice plot twist! Can't wait for the next update!
You just made my Christmas even better, Akela! I love the idea of Musa sponsoring the group going to Nationals. Bet Rachel could learn a thing or two from her, eh? And Tina getting the scepter *whistles*, that's a nice plot twist! Can't wait for the next update!
12/6/2011 c10 8xJunainaxAzharax
Sorry I haven't been around for a while! but all is explained in the newest chapter of TNND! :) lol, luv this chapter!
8xJunainaxAzharaxSorry I haven't been around for a while! but all is explained in the newest chapter of TNND! :) lol, luv this chapter!
12/4/2011 c10 51rogue-scholar07
So the fairy and the witches are banding together and New Directions took Regionals. Things seem to be falling into place...which is usually when things start to fall apart. Great chapter!
51rogue-scholar07So the fairy and the witches are banding together and New Directions took Regionals. Things seem to be falling into place...which is usually when things start to fall apart. Great chapter!