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6Spiral-Of-Fools
Aw, it's so cute! I can't wait for your next update! This is one of my favorites for this ship! :)
6Spiral-Of-FoolsAw, it's so cute! I can't wait for your next update! This is one of my favorites for this ship! :)
12/29/2012 c10 5Explicitly Simple
I actually really like this story. It's pretty cool, especially each reason lined up in the chapter! :D
5Explicitly SimpleI actually really like this story. It's pretty cool, especially each reason lined up in the chapter! :D
12/4/2012 c10 Guest
WRITE MORE NOOOOWWW! I AM ADDICTED TO THIS STORY PLEASE HELP SO GOOOD!
WRITE MORE NOOOOWWW! I AM ADDICTED TO THIS STORY PLEASE HELP SO GOOOD!
11/11/2012 c10 6KJtheELMtree
Oh my goodness this is GRRRR-EAT!
And congatulations on gettign your first boyfriend! Hopefully he's better than mine!
Oh yeah UPDATE!
-Beth M
6KJtheELMtreeOh my goodness this is GRRRR-EAT!
And congatulations on gettign your first boyfriend! Hopefully he's better than mine!
Oh yeah UPDATE!
-Beth M
10/30/2012 c10 5Dictator4Life
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. PLEASE... I NEED A HIT, MAN. I HAVEN'T HAD ONE IN MONTHS. JUST... WHERE'S THE STUFF, MAN? I NEED IT.
5Dictator4LifeI LOVE THIS SO MUCH. PLEASE... I NEED A HIT, MAN. I HAVEN'T HAD ONE IN MONTHS. JUST... WHERE'S THE STUFF, MAN? I NEED IT.
9/16/2012 c10 Guest
I don't usually give reviews. Which is really ironic because when I wrote fanfics I was begging on my knees for reviews. Anywho, theres things I don't like about this. The chapters are short. I don't know if you're really thinking of only doing 35 one-shots, but I don't like that idea. And I think you can put your emotions deeper into your work.
But I absolutely love this. Usually, I have too many critiques to even send a review, but I truly love this. You are sticking to canon and I love that - And you're actually aiming for something difficult. Most people would be like "Oh. Reincarnation. Thats hard. I'LL JUST WRITE ABOUT HOW SAMMY AND LEO ARE RELATED." I'm just like "...If you're going to write about sometihng, atleast be creative about it." But anyways, I do like this. I love how you are actually putting yourself in their place. Seeing the difficulties. Seeing what they would see, and putting on the awkwardness instead while everybody else would write like "And then, as Leo set eyes upon her, he knew instantly that they were soulmates." And Hazel is no Mary Sue.
But (I'm but-ing again), I do think you can put some serious emotion into this work. I think you actually have the potential to do so. Also, it would make your posts longer. Trust me, I had serious issues making my posts longer. Typically they were about five pages, but then as I continued to grow deeper into the web they started to be about fifteen.
I hope you didn't take this offensively, becuase this is definately not an insult :)
I don't usually give reviews. Which is really ironic because when I wrote fanfics I was begging on my knees for reviews. Anywho, theres things I don't like about this. The chapters are short. I don't know if you're really thinking of only doing 35 one-shots, but I don't like that idea. And I think you can put your emotions deeper into your work.
But I absolutely love this. Usually, I have too many critiques to even send a review, but I truly love this. You are sticking to canon and I love that - And you're actually aiming for something difficult. Most people would be like "Oh. Reincarnation. Thats hard. I'LL JUST WRITE ABOUT HOW SAMMY AND LEO ARE RELATED." I'm just like "...If you're going to write about sometihng, atleast be creative about it." But anyways, I do like this. I love how you are actually putting yourself in their place. Seeing the difficulties. Seeing what they would see, and putting on the awkwardness instead while everybody else would write like "And then, as Leo set eyes upon her, he knew instantly that they were soulmates." And Hazel is no Mary Sue.
But (I'm but-ing again), I do think you can put some serious emotion into this work. I think you actually have the potential to do so. Also, it would make your posts longer. Trust me, I had serious issues making my posts longer. Typically they were about five pages, but then as I continued to grow deeper into the web they started to be about fifteen.
I hope you didn't take this offensively, becuase this is definately not an insult :)
9/2/2012 c10 Guest
nice story
nice story
8/10/2012 c10 BlackberrySpring
Please! Write more! It has been FFFFFOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEE EEEVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEERRRRR RRRRRRRR!
Please! Write more! It has been FFFFFOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEE EEEVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEERRRRR RRRRRRRR!