for Star Stealing Girl11/24/2012 c6 Guest
MORE,MORE! I WANT MORE!
MORE,MORE! I WANT MORE!
8/3/2012 c6 
18JPandS
No! I protest against complications! XD lol I'd really hate to see where Rei might be going with all her staring and what not. I am seriously nervous here! haha can't this just be an easy love? ;) jk
Anyhow, this was a pretty flawless chapter! I mean, wow! It was awesome and lengthy and there was a kiss! I was so excited! Plus, Trunks POV is so intriguing and realistic. I really love the way you write him! Also, your writing in this latest chapter seemed to have gotten ten times better!
I mean, it was great before but for some reason this chapter seemed so much stronger. Maybe it was because of all the progression or something but regardless, it was such a pleasure to read!
Thank you so much for updating! I cannot wait to read more!
18JPandSNo! I protest against complications! XD lol I'd really hate to see where Rei might be going with all her staring and what not. I am seriously nervous here! haha can't this just be an easy love? ;) jk
Anyhow, this was a pretty flawless chapter! I mean, wow! It was awesome and lengthy and there was a kiss! I was so excited! Plus, Trunks POV is so intriguing and realistic. I really love the way you write him! Also, your writing in this latest chapter seemed to have gotten ten times better!
I mean, it was great before but for some reason this chapter seemed so much stronger. Maybe it was because of all the progression or something but regardless, it was such a pleasure to read!
Thank you so much for updating! I cannot wait to read more!
7/26/2012 c6 8divine corruption
I think this is one of favorite chapters so far! :D And it looks like Rei likes him now as well. I agree with Trunks that's is nothing wrong with having physical strength and her height doesnt make her any less any feminine. And for some reason I really can see Rei saying that to Makoto, especially with her Manga counterpart.
Anyway, I wonder how Makoto will handle now that Rei likes Trunks. xD I'm looking forward to your next update.
By the way,I dont mean to offend, but you should split the paragraphs when two or more people are talking. I mean having their paragraph say Makoto and Trunks are talking. It made it a bit hard and slightly annoying to read the whole chapter like that.
8divine corruptionI think this is one of favorite chapters so far! :D And it looks like Rei likes him now as well. I agree with Trunks that's is nothing wrong with having physical strength and her height doesnt make her any less any feminine. And for some reason I really can see Rei saying that to Makoto, especially with her Manga counterpart.
Anyway, I wonder how Makoto will handle now that Rei likes Trunks. xD I'm looking forward to your next update.
By the way,I dont mean to offend, but you should split the paragraphs when two or more people are talking. I mean having their paragraph say Makoto and Trunks are talking. It made it a bit hard and slightly annoying to read the whole chapter like that.
7/22/2012 c6 9Jewlbunny
I think Rei likes him. Oh boy. This is going to be hard for the Demi-saiyan to handle. Especially since his powers are being held back. Well as always, please continue writing.
9JewlbunnyI think Rei likes him. Oh boy. This is going to be hard for the Demi-saiyan to handle. Especially since his powers are being held back. Well as always, please continue writing.
7/5/2012 c6 Jaing Li
Wonderful chapter! I'm so glad you continued! Please update again soon! I hope Trunks figures out where his power is going soon. This is a wonderful story, please keep going!
Wonderful chapter! I'm so glad you continued! Please update again soon! I hope Trunks figures out where his power is going soon. This is a wonderful story, please keep going!
7/4/2012 c6 8Minij Akane
Hi HI!
Very good chapter! Loved Trunks' POV! soo so good!
can't wait for the next chappie!
-Akane
8Minij AkaneHi HI!
Very good chapter! Loved Trunks' POV! soo so good!
can't wait for the next chappie!
-Akane
7/4/2012 c6 1MasterXMaster
Great Fic! I love crossovers and Mako x Trunks are my favorites! Keep up the good work! *_*
1MasterXMasterGreat Fic! I love crossovers and Mako x Trunks are my favorites! Keep up the good work! *_*
7/4/2012 c6 1Ryujin65
I'm happy that there is a new chapter of this. I've read everyone. Sailor Jupiter is my favorite of the Senshi. when I used to RP Sailor Moon with my friends so long ago, it was often her that my charrie fell for. _ hurrah for a good Mako Romance fic.
1Ryujin65I'm happy that there is a new chapter of this. I've read everyone. Sailor Jupiter is my favorite of the Senshi. when I used to RP Sailor Moon with my friends so long ago, it was often her that my charrie fell for. _ hurrah for a good Mako Romance fic.
6/14/2012 c5 8Minij Akane
Konnichi Wa!
I'm greatly enjoying your story! Trunks and Mako are my favs! so that makes it even better! ;p
Hope you update soon!
-Akane
8Minij AkaneKonnichi Wa!
I'm greatly enjoying your story! Trunks and Mako are my favs! so that makes it even better! ;p
Hope you update soon!
-Akane
4/23/2012 c5 Jaing Li
WOW. Absolutely wonderful story! I haven't sat and read anything on FF.N in a long time, but this was certainly worth the time.
I've never thought of Trunks and Makoto as a couple, but now I can't see it any other way. I absolutely love your character development and the interaction between the two.
I sincerely hope that you continue this story, its FANTASTIC. Please, please keep writing. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you for writing such a great story!
WOW. Absolutely wonderful story! I haven't sat and read anything on FF.N in a long time, but this was certainly worth the time.
I've never thought of Trunks and Makoto as a couple, but now I can't see it any other way. I absolutely love your character development and the interaction between the two.
I sincerely hope that you continue this story, its FANTASTIC. Please, please keep writing. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you for writing such a great story!
4/15/2012 c5 JPandS
I was so happy to see an update!
It is certainly interesting to see them get to know each other better. Also, its good to see that they're keeping the truth out there and not dancing around in some charade where they both know they're hiding something but try to keep it secret. Now that leaves for some honest interaction ;)
I can't wait to read more and hope you'll update soon! Also, I dread the day where his time machine will be fixed :( Such a sad thought! But still, can't wait to see what else happens until that time!
Good job so far and keep up the good work!
I was so happy to see an update!
It is certainly interesting to see them get to know each other better. Also, its good to see that they're keeping the truth out there and not dancing around in some charade where they both know they're hiding something but try to keep it secret. Now that leaves for some honest interaction ;)
I can't wait to read more and hope you'll update soon! Also, I dread the day where his time machine will be fixed :( Such a sad thought! But still, can't wait to see what else happens until that time!
Good job so far and keep up the good work!
4/9/2012 c4 micknutson9
Nice, I'm enjoying this fic so far except for teensy, weensy continuity error, It was the Moon Kingdom from the Silver Millinium ruled by Princess Serenity's mother Queen Selenity and her court not Usagi and herself and her court. And secondly, Neo Crystal Tokyo is in the future where Chibi-Usa is from and both Usagi and Mamoru are both Neo Queen Serenity and Neo King Endymion respectfully. Mamoru was Prince Endymion during the time of the fall of the Moon Kingdom and the Silver Millinium. Other than that though, I truly enjoyed the fic and hopeful for more future updates. Keep up the good work.
This is micknutson9 sighning off, have a terrific day. :-)
Nice, I'm enjoying this fic so far except for teensy, weensy continuity error, It was the Moon Kingdom from the Silver Millinium ruled by Princess Serenity's mother Queen Selenity and her court not Usagi and herself and her court. And secondly, Neo Crystal Tokyo is in the future where Chibi-Usa is from and both Usagi and Mamoru are both Neo Queen Serenity and Neo King Endymion respectfully. Mamoru was Prince Endymion during the time of the fall of the Moon Kingdom and the Silver Millinium. Other than that though, I truly enjoyed the fic and hopeful for more future updates. Keep up the good work.
This is micknutson9 sighning off, have a terrific day. :-)