for Star Stealing Girl4/9/2012 c4 micknutson9
Nice, I'm enjoying this fic so far except for teensy, weensy continuity error, It was the Moon Kingdom from the Silver Millinium ruled by Princess Serenity's mother Queen Selenity and her court not Usagi and herself and her court. And secondly, Neo Crystal Tokyo is in the future where Chibi-Usa is from and both Usagi and Mamoru are both Neo Queen Serenity and Neo King Endymion respectfully. Mamoru was Prince Endymion during the time of the fall of the Moon Kingdom and the Silver Millinium. Other than that though, I truly enjoyed the fic and hopeful for more future updates. Keep up the good work.
This is micknutson9 sighning off, have a terrific day. :-)
Nice, I'm enjoying this fic so far except for teensy, weensy continuity error, It was the Moon Kingdom from the Silver Millinium ruled by Princess Serenity's mother Queen Selenity and her court not Usagi and herself and her court. And secondly, Neo Crystal Tokyo is in the future where Chibi-Usa is from and both Usagi and Mamoru are both Neo Queen Serenity and Neo King Endymion respectfully. Mamoru was Prince Endymion during the time of the fall of the Moon Kingdom and the Silver Millinium. Other than that though, I truly enjoyed the fic and hopeful for more future updates. Keep up the good work.
This is micknutson9 sighning off, have a terrific day. :-)
4/9/2012 c5 
9Jewlbunny
Aww man, that's awesome. Will Trunks help the Sailor Scouts? Please continue writing.
9JewlbunnyAww man, that's awesome. Will Trunks help the Sailor Scouts? Please continue writing.
3/3/2012 c3 4Fatal Mars
Awww I love the idea of mako and trunks ever since i read boy meets girls. So will the time machine be fixed. Will it end horribly? He will have to back to his timeline and she will be so hurt.
4Fatal MarsAwww I love the idea of mako and trunks ever since i read boy meets girls. So will the time machine be fixed. Will it end horribly? He will have to back to his timeline and she will be so hurt.
11/15/2011 c1 Griphus
Very good fanfic ^^ Keep up the good work!
Very good fanfic ^^ Keep up the good work!
10/31/2011 c3 14AquaTonic
This is a great story! I'm so glad I was able to find someone else that writes Makoto centered fics! It's been crazy these past few months trying to get my cravings in for more Makoto fics! I love the idea and can't wait to see how the story develops!
14AquaTonicThis is a great story! I'm so glad I was able to find someone else that writes Makoto centered fics! It's been crazy these past few months trying to get my cravings in for more Makoto fics! I love the idea and can't wait to see how the story develops!
10/25/2011 c3 JPandS
Bwahahahaha this was a hilarious update! I don't know why, but I about keeled over in laughter after Usagi pointed Trunks out and called him a beefcake. LOL
Reading their different perspectives on the situation is awesome. They both make me equally amused. I am also extremely fond of Trunks' innocence concerning girls lol. Not to mention, the teasing with the scouts was pretty funny.
Over all, I really enjoyed this update and I love long chapters! Thank you for writing and keep up the good work!
Bwahahahaha this was a hilarious update! I don't know why, but I about keeled over in laughter after Usagi pointed Trunks out and called him a beefcake. LOL
Reading their different perspectives on the situation is awesome. They both make me equally amused. I am also extremely fond of Trunks' innocence concerning girls lol. Not to mention, the teasing with the scouts was pretty funny.
Over all, I really enjoyed this update and I love long chapters! Thank you for writing and keep up the good work!
10/25/2011 c3 9Jewlbunny
Uh oh. Here we go. Things are about to get interesting. I love it! More please!
9JewlbunnyUh oh. Here we go. Things are about to get interesting. I love it! More please!
10/25/2011 c3 8divine corruption
OMG.OMG.OMG. I love this chapter. XD Funny too.. Thanks to my perverted mind. I love the bit with Makoto bumping into Trunks's crotch area. XD And Minako saying "Have fun you two!"
I thought this can't even better and it has and it's only chapter 3! The whole chapter was really good. Now that I think about it Bulma and Makoto are kind of similar. I can wait to read Makoto's explanation and Trunks reaction.
Update soon!
8divine corruptionOMG.OMG.OMG. I love this chapter. XD Funny too.. Thanks to my perverted mind. I love the bit with Makoto bumping into Trunks's crotch area. XD And Minako saying "Have fun you two!"
I thought this can't even better and it has and it's only chapter 3! The whole chapter was really good. Now that I think about it Bulma and Makoto are kind of similar. I can wait to read Makoto's explanation and Trunks reaction.
Update soon!
10/20/2011 c2 JPandS NSI
Yay! An update! ^^
I really enjoyed this chapter! I never really noticed how Trunks could be so awkward around girls lol so I had a good time reading about his feelings on the topic. ;) I also laughed when he put the time machine back in his capsule lol way to avoid that discussion! haha priceless XD
Needless to say, I am ogling over these two and of course over your story. So I would love to read more! Please update soon! ^.^
Yay! An update! ^^
I really enjoyed this chapter! I never really noticed how Trunks could be so awkward around girls lol so I had a good time reading about his feelings on the topic. ;) I also laughed when he put the time machine back in his capsule lol way to avoid that discussion! haha priceless XD
Needless to say, I am ogling over these two and of course over your story. So I would love to read more! Please update soon! ^.^
10/19/2011 c2 divine corruption
This is another wonderful chapter. The characterizations are on part. Very well written. I can literally see the scene in my mind as I read it. You made fall in love Makoto/Trunks again and this is only the chapter 2!
I really can not wait until the next chapter. You've insprired me to work on mine's XD
Later!
This is another wonderful chapter. The characterizations are on part. Very well written. I can literally see the scene in my mind as I read it. You made fall in love Makoto/Trunks again and this is only the chapter 2!
I really can not wait until the next chapter. You've insprired me to work on mine's XD
Later!
10/18/2011 c1 8divine corruption
Holy Crap, it's been YEARS since I read A Dbz/Sm fic, especially one centering Makoto. Congrats on you for getting me to read them again. XD I cant wait for the next update.
8divine corruptionHoly Crap, it's been YEARS since I read A Dbz/Sm fic, especially one centering Makoto. Congrats on you for getting me to read them again. XD I cant wait for the next update.
10/16/2011 c1 18JPandS
Awesome! I absolutely adore this pairing and I am so excited to find another fic about them! ^^ I enjoyed Trunks departure from his parents, those two always crack me up! As for Makoto, I feel so bad for her! But alas, I can't wait to read more and hope you will update soon! Until then, good job so far!
18JPandSAwesome! I absolutely adore this pairing and I am so excited to find another fic about them! ^^ I enjoyed Trunks departure from his parents, those two always crack me up! As for Makoto, I feel so bad for her! But alas, I can't wait to read more and hope you will update soon! Until then, good job so far!