for Generation Genesis9/3/2012 c1 Guest
not bad so far
not bad so far
7/15/2012 c1
45Dream the Fox
That's awesome! Can't wait for more! I love that you make C. Tails so cute! C. Sonic too. M. Sonic and Tails are just so awesome.. God, I love this story.
Up-date soon!
45Dream the FoxThat's awesome! Can't wait for more! I love that you make C. Tails so cute! C. Sonic too. M. Sonic and Tails are just so awesome.. God, I love this story.
Up-date soon!
10/21/2011 c1
3Mako-chan1
Well, this was insanely adorable! The last part at the end was so sweet! I'm curious to see what you have in store for your next chapter! :Db
3Mako-chan1Well, this was insanely adorable! The last part at the end was so sweet! I'm curious to see what you have in store for your next chapter! :Db
10/17/2011 c1 DanceDream
Yay, another story on this theme! =DDD Great start; what do you mean, you're terrible at writing little kids? It *is* important to remember that Little Tails, while he is still only four, also thinks more like someone a little older, with that smart little brain of his (I love Tiny Tails soooo much...!). So, you had this particular little kid characterized perfectly! Not to sound offensive, if this came across that way... I don't even think we've met yet! My bad; hi, I'm DanceDream, obsessive Sonic fan, at your service. :)
It's interesting to see how the little incarnations of Sonic and Tails react to things such as big groups of people; after all, no matter who they are or who they grow up to be, they're still young kids, and formerly very solitary kids, at that. How they kept clinging to each other like that, and eventually to Older Sonic, was really cute and made me smile. I'm sorry, I'm such a girl... ^^
Haha, a four-year-old beating a ten-year-old six times at a board game? Without outside help? Ha, no wonder Sonic was so ticked off! XD Don't blame him at all!
Aw, the scene at the end was so sweet! If all the rest of the ficlets are this sweet, then this is going to be a fic I'm going to enjoy for a long time to come! =) Great job so far; keep it up, and happy writing! :)
Yay, another story on this theme! =DDD Great start; what do you mean, you're terrible at writing little kids? It *is* important to remember that Little Tails, while he is still only four, also thinks more like someone a little older, with that smart little brain of his (I love Tiny Tails soooo much...!). So, you had this particular little kid characterized perfectly! Not to sound offensive, if this came across that way... I don't even think we've met yet! My bad; hi, I'm DanceDream, obsessive Sonic fan, at your service. :)
It's interesting to see how the little incarnations of Sonic and Tails react to things such as big groups of people; after all, no matter who they are or who they grow up to be, they're still young kids, and formerly very solitary kids, at that. How they kept clinging to each other like that, and eventually to Older Sonic, was really cute and made me smile. I'm sorry, I'm such a girl... ^^
Haha, a four-year-old beating a ten-year-old six times at a board game? Without outside help? Ha, no wonder Sonic was so ticked off! XD Don't blame him at all!
Aw, the scene at the end was so sweet! If all the rest of the ficlets are this sweet, then this is going to be a fic I'm going to enjoy for a long time to come! =) Great job so far; keep it up, and happy writing! :)
10/16/2011 c1
8jakeroo123
I quite like it so far, though I'll be honest: Calling Tails a teenager is quite upsetting to me. Other than that, it's great.
8jakeroo123I quite like it so far, though I'll be honest: Calling Tails a teenager is quite upsetting to me. Other than that, it's great.
