for Adventures of Jake:The English dragon6/29/2012 c5 
4Major Simi
well nice and a bit short and i would have liked to know what the afftereffects were, but still well done keep going
4Major Simiwell nice and a bit short and i would have liked to know what the afftereffects were, but still well done keep going
4/26/2012 c4 Rik
Great chapter, love the part where jett freaks out;)
can't wait till next chapter, maybe you should make few chapters more, or sequel on how jake and jett try to find out who those huntsgirl and eagle are;)
Great chapter, love the part where jett freaks out;)
can't wait till next chapter, maybe you should make few chapters more, or sequel on how jake and jett try to find out who those huntsgirl and eagle are;)
4/25/2012 c4 Major Simi
wow, looks who's back from the land of the death.
ah good chapter, battle is where it is decided if a man is made or broken. ah good chapter nice panic attack of Jett and good fighting scene.
wow, looks who's back from the land of the death.
ah good chapter, battle is where it is decided if a man is made or broken. ah good chapter nice panic attack of Jett and good fighting scene.
10/18/2011 c2 17ada69
Hey...it's pretty good so far! The only thing I would suggest is maybe longer chapters? Mine are always a little over 1,000 words and people tell me they are a little on the short side. So I could probably stand to lengthen mine a bit too. Lol.
And Jett? That's my cars name! :D Lol. Except it's spelled with one t...Jet. Lol. Yes...I named my car. Don't judge. Lol.
~ada
17ada69Hey...it's pretty good so far! The only thing I would suggest is maybe longer chapters? Mine are always a little over 1,000 words and people tell me they are a little on the short side. So I could probably stand to lengthen mine a bit too. Lol.
And Jett? That's my cars name! :D Lol. Except it's spelled with one t...Jet. Lol. Yes...I named my car. Don't judge. Lol.
~ada
10/18/2011 c1 4Major Simi
ah the old woman well girl i need trick. always a good trick to lure the heroes in traps. Good beginn
4Major Simiah the old woman well girl i need trick. always a good trick to lure the heroes in traps. Good beginn