for The Real Alan Tracy7/8/2012 c1 Alanwzee
Well done! Thank you for sharing your great story which left me reading from beginning to end. You have provided all of us many life examples to learn from and apply within our own families.
Well done! Thank you for sharing your great story which left me reading from beginning to end. You have provided all of us many life examples to learn from and apply within our own families.
6/6/2012 c10 
2alikatherinekay123
aww when jeff goes come on son we'll go up together it remindes me of derek redmond when is dad helped him to the finish line :D
2alikatherinekay123aww when jeff goes come on son we'll go up together it remindes me of derek redmond when is dad helped him to the finish line :D
1/19/2012 c9 Trillianaus
Hi. Just finished reading chapter 9. This is a ripping good yarn. Having said that, it may be a regional/different English speaking country thing, but I really want to run a spell and grammar check over it. Some grammar and spelling constructs pull me out of the story. I blame my old English master from high school. Otherwise, as I said, a ripping good yarn.
Hi. Just finished reading chapter 9. This is a ripping good yarn. Having said that, it may be a regional/different English speaking country thing, but I really want to run a spell and grammar check over it. Some grammar and spelling constructs pull me out of the story. I blame my old English master from high school. Otherwise, as I said, a ripping good yarn.
12/12/2011 c12 67Writer With Sprite
A really good story, I'm glad you have posted. There are a few minor grammar errors (I know mine have 'em too) and a few things that are like breath/breathe, but I loved the work, it was quite enjoyable. I think you took a stereotypical story and made it your own, unique, and different. Overall, it was very well done and I quite enjoyed it. I hope you post your other work.
67Writer With SpriteA really good story, I'm glad you have posted. There are a few minor grammar errors (I know mine have 'em too) and a few things that are like breath/breathe, but I loved the work, it was quite enjoyable. I think you took a stereotypical story and made it your own, unique, and different. Overall, it was very well done and I quite enjoyed it. I hope you post your other work.
11/30/2011 c12 Laesk
a truly good chapter and a good story.
are you going to add more to this story?
will you write another and turn it into a series?
what secrets do Alan's programs have? what else does little Alan Tracy do without his family knowing?
i hope you do write more. i have been enjoying reading this story. thank you for writing it and sharing it with us all.
a truly good chapter and a good story.
are you going to add more to this story?
will you write another and turn it into a series?
what secrets do Alan's programs have? what else does little Alan Tracy do without his family knowing?
i hope you do write more. i have been enjoying reading this story. thank you for writing it and sharing it with us all.
11/30/2011 c12 1Thera-Rocklynn
Amazing and awesome chapter! I love this story so much! I can't wait to read more of your amazing and awesome story! HAve a great and wonderful day!
1Thera-RocklynnAmazing and awesome chapter! I love this story so much! I can't wait to read more of your amazing and awesome story! HAve a great and wonderful day!
11/30/2011 c12 26thunderbird5
I really like this storie. A few days ago i realised that i'm going through the same things as Alan. I've been trying for years to show that i could do something to but so far i keep on falling in a not enough hole. No matter how hard i try i always fall back in again. Thanks for your storie. I hope to see some more of these.
26thunderbird5I really like this storie. A few days ago i realised that i'm going through the same things as Alan. I've been trying for years to show that i could do something to but so far i keep on falling in a not enough hole. No matter how hard i try i always fall back in again. Thanks for your storie. I hope to see some more of these.
11/29/2011 c12 NotanAccountAnymore
Such a cute ending, but I do have to say that I disagree with Alan not being able to take the AP tests. I would be a lot more upset if I was Alan, and I would've made sure I could take them, but I do understand Jeff's worry. Oh well, I'm going to imagine that Alan did well enough on the tests he took that he'll be allowed in after taking hte other tests later in the summer. The lovely thing about fiction, I can add to it. Thanks for a great story, I hope you write more :)
Such a cute ending, but I do have to say that I disagree with Alan not being able to take the AP tests. I would be a lot more upset if I was Alan, and I would've made sure I could take them, but I do understand Jeff's worry. Oh well, I'm going to imagine that Alan did well enough on the tests he took that he'll be allowed in after taking hte other tests later in the summer. The lovely thing about fiction, I can add to it. Thanks for a great story, I hope you write more :)
11/29/2011 c12 61criminally charmed
That's the best you can do? Gee - I was thinking emergency surgery, Alan collapsing...sigh.
Looking forward to your next effort
61criminally charmedThat's the best you can do? Gee - I was thinking emergency surgery, Alan collapsing...sigh.
Looking forward to your next effort
11/24/2011 c11 Laesk
another wonderful story. thank you for adding it. i am really enjoying reading your story. thank you for keeping it updating. you have a gift for writing stories
another wonderful story. thank you for adding it. i am really enjoying reading your story. thank you for keeping it updating. you have a gift for writing stories
11/22/2011 c11 beckyboo10
this story is amazing cant wait to read more,i come home every dad and check my e mail hoping that you have posted another chapter!
this story is amazing cant wait to read more,i come home every dad and check my e mail hoping that you have posted another chapter!
11/22/2011 c11 26thunderbird5
hi there. Grate chapter. I remember the days when i use to run. At first i use to run alone from grade 1to2 after been told that someone would be there to stop me at the finnishing line. But everytime there were no one to stop me and i use to run to far over the line. I could see the 2lines where i had to run but not the line where i had to stop. After stopping at last the other kids who could see would laugh at me. Then in grade5 i got balled over at the high jump when another blind kid whent off the running path and jumpt strate into me. From grade 6to9 i got a teacher to run with me like all the blind kids. From grade10 i never took part again. I didn't want the kids to laugh at me again. So yeah, i have a pritty good idea how timmy felt.
26thunderbird5hi there. Grate chapter. I remember the days when i use to run. At first i use to run alone from grade 1to2 after been told that someone would be there to stop me at the finnishing line. But everytime there were no one to stop me and i use to run to far over the line. I could see the 2lines where i had to run but not the line where i had to stop. After stopping at last the other kids who could see would laugh at me. Then in grade5 i got balled over at the high jump when another blind kid whent off the running path and jumpt strate into me. From grade 6to9 i got a teacher to run with me like all the blind kids. From grade10 i never took part again. I didn't want the kids to laugh at me again. So yeah, i have a pritty good idea how timmy felt.