for Last time I looked1/29/2012 c9 
35East of Fenchurch
Amazing chapter Fen, so poingnant. Please update soon, you can't leave them love sick and miserable.
Kim.x
35East of FenchurchAmazing chapter Fen, so poingnant. Please update soon, you can't leave them love sick and miserable.
Kim.x
1/29/2012 c9 sash queen of the jungle
Poor gene , but better for Bolly. Perhaps their final night of passion may have resulted in them conceiving a child? Pretty please. Then Bolly would want to stay and gene would notwant her to go. Thanks for writing and sharing. Please update soon
Poor gene , but better for Bolly. Perhaps their final night of passion may have resulted in them conceiving a child? Pretty please. Then Bolly would want to stay and gene would notwant her to go. Thanks for writing and sharing. Please update soon
1/28/2012 c9 44GeneHuntress
Another great chapter, Fen. You're killing us with this one, though. Will those two ever catch a break? *sigh*
Obviously I'll keep reading in the hopes! xx
44GeneHuntressAnother great chapter, Fen. You're killing us with this one, though. Will those two ever catch a break? *sigh*
Obviously I'll keep reading in the hopes! xx
1/28/2012 c9 31xX-Misty
Oh god no, bloody Layton, and worse than that, slimy Evan - between those two can Alex's body remain alive? Ugh, Evan, get off your beard-ridden backside and DO THE RIGHT THING here! Ahem, sorry! As for Alex and Gene, such a heartbreaking situation - how on earth are you going to find a way to give them a break? I can't wait for the next part x
31xX-MistyOh god no, bloody Layton, and worse than that, slimy Evan - between those two can Alex's body remain alive? Ugh, Evan, get off your beard-ridden backside and DO THE RIGHT THING here! Ahem, sorry! As for Alex and Gene, such a heartbreaking situation - how on earth are you going to find a way to give them a break? I can't wait for the next part x
1/28/2012 c9 13JoinTheHunt1981
:'( Poor Gene.
So, another twist...Will Layton finish Alex off? Thanks so much for the wonderful update! Please write more soon!
xxx
13JoinTheHunt1981:'( Poor Gene.
So, another twist...Will Layton finish Alex off? Thanks so much for the wonderful update! Please write more soon!
xxx
1/28/2012 c9 68Jazzola
Poor old Gene... and to be perfectly honest, how selfish of Alex. But fabulous writing, and I really enjoyed it! More soon?
Jazzola :D
68JazzolaPoor old Gene... and to be perfectly honest, how selfish of Alex. But fabulous writing, and I really enjoyed it! More soon?
Jazzola :D
1/15/2012 c8 Curms
Ooooh I'm loving this, brilliant writing Fenella , I can't wait for the next chapter !
Ooooh I'm loving this, brilliant writing Fenella , I can't wait for the next chapter !
1/15/2012 c8 29Siggy
Cracking dialogue along with miserable Alex and drunk Gene - a recipe for angst but at least Alex took some decisive action.
And some guilty Evan of course. Makes for quite a heady plot mix but I'm enjoying every second.
29SiggyCracking dialogue along with miserable Alex and drunk Gene - a recipe for angst but at least Alex took some decisive action.
And some guilty Evan of course. Makes for quite a heady plot mix but I'm enjoying every second.
1/13/2012 c8 oceancounty
Lovely chapter- so touching. I loved the use of the Life of Brian song-wonderful.
Lovely chapter- so touching. I loved the use of the Life of Brian song-wonderful.
1/13/2012 c8 44GeneHuntress
Another great chapter, Fen - knew she wouldn't be able to stay away. :)
More soon, please? xx
44GeneHuntressAnother great chapter, Fen - knew she wouldn't be able to stay away. :)
More soon, please? xx
1/12/2012 c8 35East of Fenchurch
Yay! The Guv and Bolly are back together. Really enjoying this story Fen, I love the mix of good narative and hot smut you spoil us with.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Kim.x
35East of FenchurchYay! The Guv and Bolly are back together. Really enjoying this story Fen, I love the mix of good narative and hot smut you spoil us with.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Kim.x
1/12/2012 c8 68Jazzola
Much better! Fabulous writing, and I loved the characterisation in this- brilliant. More soon?
Jazzola :D
68JazzolaMuch better! Fabulous writing, and I loved the characterisation in this- brilliant. More soon?
Jazzola :D
1/12/2012 c8 sash queen of the jungle
Yes Alex gets an invite in. I was so scared that gene was not going to accept her. That new dci sounds like a bastard. Thanks for writing and sharing. Please update more soon.
Yes Alex gets an invite in. I was so scared that gene was not going to accept her. That new dci sounds like a bastard. Thanks for writing and sharing. Please update more soon.
1/12/2012 c8 13JoinTheHunt1981
Awww :( Poor Alex! I really hope they sort it out soon...They're miserable without each other!
However, I can't wait to read more! :)
xxx
13JoinTheHunt1981Awww :( Poor Alex! I really hope they sort it out soon...They're miserable without each other!
However, I can't wait to read more! :)
xxx