for Last time I looked10/31/2011 c2 Curms
This is really good ! I can't wait til hopefully the next Chapter when Gene will prove Alex wrong ( :
This is really good ! I can't wait til hopefully the next Chapter when Gene will prove Alex wrong ( :
10/30/2011 c2 
29Siggy
Just catching up with this new story. Great characterisation and snappy dialogue with just a hint of intrigue. Looking forward to more.
29SiggyJust catching up with this new story. Great characterisation and snappy dialogue with just a hint of intrigue. Looking forward to more.
10/30/2011 c2 oceancounty
This is getting very interesting, terrific chapter. I do love how you capture their personalities. The last few lines were perfect- oh silly girl-you will not be disappointed:)
This is getting very interesting, terrific chapter. I do love how you capture their personalities. The last few lines were perfect- oh silly girl-you will not be disappointed:)
10/30/2011 c2 44GeneHuntress
Somehow I don't think she will be disappointed ...
Can't wait to see where this goes next, more soon please? :)
44GeneHuntressSomehow I don't think she will be disappointed ...
Can't wait to see where this goes next, more soon please? :)
10/30/2011 c2 68Jazzola
Not quite sure what to make of this chapter! Much more... dystopic, than your writing generally is. But fantastic all the same, and I love Alex's remarks at the end. More soon?
Jazzola
68JazzolaNot quite sure what to make of this chapter! Much more... dystopic, than your writing generally is. But fantastic all the same, and I love Alex's remarks at the end. More soon?
Jazzola
10/30/2011 c2 35East of Fenchurch
Brilliant chapter Fen. Love the way Gene knows where to find Alex and I actually cheered when Alex was honest about lusting after him.
If only they'd been that candid on screen.
Kim.x
35East of FenchurchBrilliant chapter Fen. Love the way Gene knows where to find Alex and I actually cheered when Alex was honest about lusting after him.
If only they'd been that candid on screen.
Kim.x
10/26/2011 c1 44GeneHuntress
Loving this already. You get Gene and Alex spot on, and the story's already intreguing. More soon please? :)
44GeneHuntressLoving this already. You get Gene and Alex spot on, and the story's already intreguing. More soon please? :)
10/23/2011 c1 68Jazzola
A little historical note: if Gene was born in 1934, he would have taken the Higher School Certificate, not the eleven plus. However, this is your story, so I leave the finer details to you.
Fantastic writing! I thoroughly enjoyed it- very intriguing and some brilliant lines from Gene. More soon, please!
Jazzola
68JazzolaA little historical note: if Gene was born in 1934, he would have taken the Higher School Certificate, not the eleven plus. However, this is your story, so I leave the finer details to you.
Fantastic writing! I thoroughly enjoyed it- very intriguing and some brilliant lines from Gene. More soon, please!
Jazzola
10/23/2011 c1 7LionessOfTheQuattro
Woooooooooooooo new story =D Love it already, more please!
Rachel xx
7LionessOfTheQuattroWoooooooooooooo new story =D Love it already, more please!
Rachel xx
10/22/2011 c1 oceancounty
A new Fenella story- claps hands wildly! Brilliant start, up to your usual high standards- funny, witty, and intriguing. As always your characters are pitch perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter.
A new Fenella story- claps hands wildly! Brilliant start, up to your usual high standards- funny, witty, and intriguing. As always your characters are pitch perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter.
10/22/2011 c1 35East of Fenchurch
All's right with the world again, we have another Fenella Church fic to savour.
An intriguing start Fen, more soon please.
Kim.x
35East of FenchurchAll's right with the world again, we have another Fenella Church fic to savour.
An intriguing start Fen, more soon please.
Kim.x
10/21/2011 c1 41theoofoof
Ooooh, interesting start. Who is this man? How is he in this world?
Can't wait for more.
41theoofoofOoooh, interesting start. Who is this man? How is he in this world?
Can't wait for more.
10/21/2011 c1 sash queen of the jungle
OMG nice interrogation technique- talk or the meatballs get it. So is this stranger from the future? Love the set up here and the relationships between characters. How did Alex help gene win that ten pound bet from ray? Please update soon
OMG nice interrogation technique- talk or the meatballs get it. So is this stranger from the future? Love the set up here and the relationships between characters. How did Alex help gene win that ten pound bet from ray? Please update soon