for Struggling Against the Darkness11/25/2012 c1 MrsNeeNee1999
Brilliant! Please please please continue
Brilliant! Please please please continue
3/27/2012 c1
1Chocolate Heals All Wounds
I like the plot line and the way the story is heading so far. Update please so I can read more.
1Chocolate Heals All WoundsI like the plot line and the way the story is heading so far. Update please so I can read more.
1/26/2012 c1 TheBlackOne23
If you don't continue this, I'll just die. This is so good and poor bells D: I like your style of writing and I really really really can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens ! :D
If you don't continue this, I'll just die. This is so good and poor bells D: I like your style of writing and I really really really can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens ! :D
1/5/2012 c1
9xxteamjasperxx
I was so ready click next chapter but was sad to find I couldn't. Can't wait to read more and see Bella get away from the toxic relationship and see how Jasper plays into this.
9xxteamjasperxxI was so ready click next chapter but was sad to find I couldn't. Can't wait to read more and see Bella get away from the toxic relationship and see how Jasper plays into this.
11/22/2011 c1
1lannaislusciousredd
i hope you plan to continue on from this because it is really good. x
1lannaislusciousreddi hope you plan to continue on from this because it is really good. x
10/23/2011 c1
1TwilightAddict71484
if that's just a sample i can't wait for the rest..post again soon.
1TwilightAddict71484if that's just a sample i can't wait for the rest..post again soon.
10/23/2011 c1 Nikki
Cool beans. I love the direction this story is going but I want to smack Charlie for being so stupid! I know he knows his daughter is being hit yet he ignores it!
Cool beans. I love the direction this story is going but I want to smack Charlie for being so stupid! I know he knows his daughter is being hit yet he ignores it!
10/23/2011 c1 TwilightFan888
OH Bella! that poor thing! i hope you will write more soon!
and i can NOT wait till the next chapter!
OH Bella! that poor thing! i hope you will write more soon!
and i can NOT wait till the next chapter!
