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1/29 c21 alistarsmusic
I think the only thing that kept me wondering the most was about Raven's necklace. Why would she have it if it wasn't her's to begin with? How did she get it? or when? And how did Andrew know she was wearing it? That guy sure does have some nerve for accusing things when he's more at fault than anyone else. And I bet that witch leader is planning something big if they're not there.
11/9/2012 c20 avril popcorn
Hey I'm loving the story so far but I really want you to add more on cause I want to know what happens I'm really anoxious to know so please please please add more on soon :) x
8/19/2012 c20 1alistarsmusic
So Raven finally remembers Adrian's daughter's name? But why would she forget? And thats a lovely name. It's another bird name like Raven's :) I'm also starting to think that maybe Raven is Sierra. I don't know why but thats what keeps coming to mind. Especially after she saw that Sierra is there but may be under disguise. I don't think anyone is under disguise but that they have no recollection that their this person. Like Raven. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens with the witches!
7/28/2012 c19 alistarsmusic
I think there is a lot more to everything than I originally thought. All of this is a little mind boggling. I don't really know what to think but that Raven has something more to look for or more like someone. :] I wonder what will happen next? Can't wait to find out.
7/24/2012 c18 2Heartbreaker27
omqqqq UPDATE
7/23/2012 c18 1alistarsmusic
I don't know what to really think. I think the thoughts are all a jumble of a mess in my head. But I guess I'll try to clear them up here. About the song, I think there's something that Raven isn't telling Maya. And I think Raven knew there were more than one pair of ears listening to her. And I think Clara should see if Raven can translate the words to the spell. And there might be more to the song than what I think...
7/22/2012 c17 2Heartbreaker27
ok.. i soo need you to update like asap
6/15/2012 c17 1alistarsmusic
Umm...I don't know what to think. I'm a little surprised that that lady had that thing in her foot without knowing. But it's good Raven knew. And I have no idea why, but I feel like Adrian and Raven might have had a thing and the girl is their daughter..? I might be wrong but I just thought I shoud put that out there.
6/11/2012 c16 18SeleneD
OOOh Myyyy God!

That was so good and yay you're back. Finally! Woot woot. Confetti for everyone.

Update soon, I'm glad Raven is getting her memories back and I need to know what happens to her. Also, where are the twins? I miss my TWIIIIINS!
6/8/2012 c16 1alistarsmusic
Aww it's nice to know that Raven cares about the little girl. But for some reason I can't help but think that the little girl might be her kid or something. I hope I find that out. :D
6/8/2012 c16 2Heartbreaker27
aww that was sweet but they kicked major butt back there... sad that the chappie was so short but cant wait til the next chappie
3/12/2012 c15 18SeleneD
Woah, ** really hit the fan lol. You need to update like asap, I have to know what happens next... ksdbkjsafkjfguk. (sorry it took me so long, I read in on phone but couldn't review, so here it is)
3/9/2012 c15 2Heartbreaker27
oh my god oh my god oh my god... wirte more now... i wanna know whats going on and what was the little irl talkin about how did they know raven
3/9/2012 c15 1alistarsmusic
Why the hell did Raven attack Maya? Not that I'm mad or anything. It just seems so sudden...But with the way she looked at her I would agree too that they must have met before. And something bad went on with them. That's why Raven got so mad. I just wish I knew what it was that happened... :/
3/7/2012 c14 18SeleneD
Oh wow. The part where Raven was eating his heart made me make faces while reading, it was weird, but I guess needed for the story. She is one weird lady lol. Loved it, as usual, so update soon :))
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