3/13/2012 c1 Il'Diko
You have really done a marvellous job here, I’m lost of words and I can only say clichés or repeat myself...

Andromedas personality shone trough this. You made her so strong! Yet I loved that she and Ted balanced each other out. And this must be the most in character Remus I ever read, you captured the weakness in him so well and I’m glad I saw Dora in another light, you managed to make a strong character in canon seem weak and breakable, without making her ooc.

I loved Remus’ inner thought and I enjoyed the dialogues immensely . You wrote about love without making everything sappy and far-fetched. I really, really loved it!

Another fav!

10/24/2011 c1 26Tempestt Londyn
Sigh. You know, try as I might, I can never appropriately capture the dynamics between Andromeda and Remus. Or, I should say, I'm so busy trying to get around to writing about characters who aren't exactly my favorites :)

This is outstanding. Now, I've read stories centering around these two in the past, but they always seem to be overly wordy or overly dramatic and my interest midway through.

But this...this is really something. You've done an excellent job characterizing Ted and I think it's really great that you've managed to allow Andromeda to retain some aspects of the "Blackness" which she tried to escape from. Tonks and Remus are well-written as well-the former especially. Always so brilliant, yet always so self-conscious with an abysmal lack of confidence.

Perhaps most importantly, I appreciate the line, "Are you going to make a run for it, Remus?" Eerily appropriate!