for A new Normal5/8/2012 c1 hi
You should really continue this story it is so good I love it so much :)
You should really continue this story it is so good I love it so much :)
4/3/2012 c1 Hello
OMG I love this story it is so incredible cant wait for the next installment
OMG I love this story it is so incredible cant wait for the next installment
11/17/2011 c1 
2madiSUNSUN
Good Job! Yeah theres a few mistakes but once i got past those it was great! You should update this soon! :)
2madiSUNSUNGood Job! Yeah theres a few mistakes but once i got past those it was great! You should update this soon! :)
10/24/2011 c1 Guest
First off, not takingthe time to come up with a title will seriously turn a LOT of people off your story automatically. Second, there are a lot of mistakes. You need to read over your work befre you post because most o f those mistakes could have and should have been caught.
First off, not takingthe time to come up with a title will seriously turn a LOT of people off your story automatically. Second, there are a lot of mistakes. You need to read over your work befre you post because most o f those mistakes could have and should have been caught.