for The Ruin Game10/26/2011 c1 
21lilmisswritergal4eva82719511
First thing I have to say - I squealed like a little girl when I saw this. I called up my friend and was like "OMG THERE'S A FIDELIO AND OLIVIA FIC."
... I did this even though she doesn't read Charlie Bone. Oh well, she's used to my ranting.
Secondly - this. Was. GOLDEN. I've always wondered (and wanted to write a story about) what happened to the girl who was lost in the Ruin. I loved how IC Livvie and Fido were. Like, I could easily see Olivia all like "Live a little, Fidelio!" and Fidelio being all "This is *not* going to end well."
The first line made me laugh, BTW. I loved it. I don't know why, exactly, but I did. :D I also really liked how the beginning and the end connected in this full circle kind of way where they had a deja vu kind of situation - if you get what I mean. It's hard to explain, but I'm hoping you understand. Also - I didn't spot any spelling/grammar mistakes, so that's a plus!
Anyway, like I said, that was golden and I loved it and I really hope you write more Fido/Livvie because I love the couple and you write them so damn wonderfully. :) Once again, great work!
- May :)
21lilmisswritergal4eva82719511First thing I have to say - I squealed like a little girl when I saw this. I called up my friend and was like "OMG THERE'S A FIDELIO AND OLIVIA FIC."
... I did this even though she doesn't read Charlie Bone. Oh well, she's used to my ranting.
Secondly - this. Was. GOLDEN. I've always wondered (and wanted to write a story about) what happened to the girl who was lost in the Ruin. I loved how IC Livvie and Fido were. Like, I could easily see Olivia all like "Live a little, Fidelio!" and Fidelio being all "This is *not* going to end well."
The first line made me laugh, BTW. I loved it. I don't know why, exactly, but I did. :D I also really liked how the beginning and the end connected in this full circle kind of way where they had a deja vu kind of situation - if you get what I mean. It's hard to explain, but I'm hoping you understand. Also - I didn't spot any spelling/grammar mistakes, so that's a plus!
Anyway, like I said, that was golden and I loved it and I really hope you write more Fido/Livvie because I love the couple and you write them so damn wonderfully. :) Once again, great work!
- May :)