for What is Lost11/10/2011 c2 
1CHPrime
i would like to see other members of the ten percent of the ten percent at this facility, and how that would work out with both the soldiers and Elizabeth...you also switched from third to first person. is that intentional, or part of a time constraint?
1CHPrimei would like to see other members of the ten percent of the ten percent at this facility, and how that would work out with both the soldiers and Elizabeth...you also switched from third to first person. is that intentional, or part of a time constraint?
11/10/2011 c2 1Valiant Naberius
Damn, I was really hoping to see her go exploring and acquainting herself with her new form. Captured and experimented on? Let's see just how poorly that's gonna go. I can't imagine it's gonna go well for anyone involved.
1Valiant NaberiusDamn, I was really hoping to see her go exploring and acquainting herself with her new form. Captured and experimented on? Let's see just how poorly that's gonna go. I can't imagine it's gonna go well for anyone involved.
11/8/2011 c1 117Jorn
Nice! I like this fic, and i hope you continue it! Maybe you should introduce someone like her, like a Guy who's a Hunter?
Nice! I like this fic, and i hope you continue it! Maybe you should introduce someone like her, like a Guy who's a Hunter?
10/26/2011 c1 3Bigreader in The Omniverse
That, was interesting. If you have the inspiration to continue it, please do.
3Bigreader in The OmniverseThat, was interesting. If you have the inspiration to continue it, please do.
10/26/2011 c1 matthew22381
hmm very cool havent read a L4D yet but this was awesome going to read the ones you cited
hmm very cool havent read a L4D yet but this was awesome going to read the ones you cited
10/26/2011 c1 Celestia GF of the Void
Zoey x Witch FTW. Please make it happen! So far good story though. Looking forward to seeing more from this.
Zoey x Witch FTW. Please make it happen! So far good story though. Looking forward to seeing more from this.
10/26/2011 c1 marticuss
not bad, just a idea i think would be cool is if liz gets some zombies to serv here, especily a butler zombie
not bad, just a idea i think would be cool is if liz gets some zombies to serv here, especily a butler zombie
10/25/2011 c1 1holyhastes
wow, this is awesome. aha. please go on. I didnt expect to wake up and read something so new.
1holyhasteswow, this is awesome. aha. please go on. I didnt expect to wake up and read something so new.
10/25/2011 c1 30Selonianth
... That'd be unique. A witch walking up to the survivors and introducing herself instead of sitting in a corner in a bra and panties and crying.
30Selonianth... That'd be unique. A witch walking up to the survivors and introducing herself instead of sitting in a corner in a bra and panties and crying.
10/25/2011 c1 Kalepos
Wonderful, I'm really hoping that you continue this. Now I'm going to check out those sane witch stories that you mentioned.
Wonderful, I'm really hoping that you continue this. Now I'm going to check out those sane witch stories that you mentioned.
10/24/2011 c1 Lord of Murder
It's pretty good you should definitely continue it. It's rare to see fics of this quality for left 4 dead. Thanks for writing it.
It's pretty good you should definitely continue it. It's rare to see fics of this quality for left 4 dead. Thanks for writing it.
10/24/2011 c1 1CHPrime
the story seems interesting, and potential for one of those 'sane witch' fic's,but the narrative switches from first person to third person suddenly near the end, which is disorienting. other then that, i see no real issues with it.
1CHPrimethe story seems interesting, and potential for one of those 'sane witch' fic's,but the narrative switches from first person to third person suddenly near the end, which is disorienting. other then that, i see no real issues with it.
10/24/2011 c1 animegamemaster6
I'm not much one for the Left4Dead games, but this is one hell of an interesting idea. I'd love to see more chapters.
I'm not much one for the Left4Dead games, but this is one hell of an interesting idea. I'd love to see more chapters.