for Pony Jackscolt and the Lightning Hoof3/26 c2 
3Alberts24
(He nodded. "Or...or if you need me."
"Why would I need you?"
It came out harsher than I meant it to.
Grover blushed right down to his Adam's apple. "Look, Pony, the truth is, I—I kind of have to protect you."
I stared at him.
All year long, I'd gotten in fights, keeping bullies away from him. I'd lost sleep worrying that he'd get beaten up next year without me. And here he was acting like he was the one who defended me.) I would be like O.o
3Alberts24(He nodded. "Or...or if you need me."
"Why would I need you?"
It came out harsher than I meant it to.
Grover blushed right down to his Adam's apple. "Look, Pony, the truth is, I—I kind of have to protect you."
I stared at him.
All year long, I'd gotten in fights, keeping bullies away from him. I'd lost sleep worrying that he'd get beaten up next year without me. And here he was acting like he was the one who defended me.) I would be like O.o
3/19 c3 4Honeycloud of RiverClan
Um... Pony knew he was a goat to begin with. And ponies have hooves, not feet.
A horse's mother is called a dame with an e. Blame my horse-obsessed friend.
The first chapter was truly hilarious. xD
4Honeycloud of RiverClanUm... Pony knew he was a goat to begin with. And ponies have hooves, not feet.
A horse's mother is called a dame with an e. Blame my horse-obsessed friend.
The first chapter was truly hilarious. xD
1/12 c1 Briase
Awesome story! Nice rendition, clever names
But you didn't really have to rename Tartarus, since in My Little Pony, they still do have Tartarus, and Cerberus. And the slips were understandable.
Awesome story! Nice rendition, clever names
But you didn't really have to rename Tartarus, since in My Little Pony, they still do have Tartarus, and Cerberus. And the slips were understandable.
1/6 c3 Distantwave
Please just stop writing. If you could call it writing. You just changed the words in the pjo books. :P
Please just stop writing. If you could call it writing. You just changed the words in the pjo books. :P
12/29/2012 c1 3Cryptic Message
I'm not even going to continue.
This is The Lightning Thief replaced with pony names. Shame, shame, shame for lack of originality.
3Cryptic MessageI'm not even going to continue.
This is The Lightning Thief replaced with pony names. Shame, shame, shame for lack of originality.
7/4/2012 c1 Guest
Is it wrong that I **ing hate pony puns
Is it wrong that I **ing hate pony puns
5/12/2012 c2 GoddessofSpringlovesthePhantom
Oh please wright more! This is really cute!
Oh please wright more! This is really cute!
4/4/2012 c2 1noseinbook42
I like it. It's kinda confusing when you make references to humans and hands...but it's good! Just make sure youre making it all ponies, not part humans. Continue!
1noseinbook42I like it. It's kinda confusing when you make references to humans and hands...but it's good! Just make sure youre making it all ponies, not part humans. Continue!
3/15/2012 c2 Guest
good,but you slipped a few times
good,but you slipped a few times