for Love Between Two Worlds3/17/2012 c23 Kit
stupid cliff hanger! please update!
stupid cliff hanger! please update!
3/16/2012 c23 TwinofDarkness
OME.Did she get shot or did Edward save her in the nik of time:D
OME.Did she get shot or did Edward save her in the nik of time:D
3/14/2012 c22 team cullen
Nooo.. Bella, get out of there. Edward better save her. Update soon please.
Nooo.. Bella, get out of there. Edward better save her. Update soon please.
1/21/2012 c22 twinofdarkness
nice chapter update soon
nice chapter update soon
12/22/2011 c19 TeamCullen.RobstenLover
Haha love it. GO BlUE ROSE! And com'on Edward. You know you love her even if she is a theif. Update soon!
Haha love it. GO BlUE ROSE! And com'on Edward. You know you love her even if she is a theif. Update soon!
12/20/2011 c19 
3marzu93
oh my..bella is kind of cruel that she lied about her feelings towards edward..but maybe all clears up in the nex chapters..update soon please
3marzu93oh my..bella is kind of cruel that she lied about her feelings towards edward..but maybe all clears up in the nex chapters..update soon please
11/20/2011 c14 drunkbuddy17
huh this story reminds me of another. its called Scarlet by archer24. im not saying u stole the plot but its really similar
huh this story reminds me of another. its called Scarlet by archer24. im not saying u stole the plot but its really similar
11/8/2011 c12 3Arianmaiden
Aah-maz-ing! Please update some more! And it would probably clear up confusion in the story if you found a beta. Just trying to be helpful.
3ArianmaidenAah-maz-ing! Please update some more! And it would probably clear up confusion in the story if you found a beta. Just trying to be helpful.
11/6/2011 c11 Arianmaiden
I love how you worked the volturi and the title into your story! You had some grammar issues, again, mainly with tenses: -ing, -ed, or nothing. Think about it this way; most things happen a few seconds before it is typed. (she tripped / he smiled / they waved) I hope that's helpful!
I love how you worked the volturi and the title into your story! You had some grammar issues, again, mainly with tenses: -ing, -ed, or nothing. Think about it this way; most things happen a few seconds before it is typed. (she tripped / he smiled / they waved) I hope that's helpful!
11/5/2011 c10 angelshunny4ever
Great story! I love the suspense! This seems really well thought out and creative! Can't wait to read more!
Great story! I love the suspense! This seems really well thought out and creative! Can't wait to read more!
11/4/2011 c9 Arianmaiden
I am truly in love with this story. You are such a good writer! And you update often. For that, you deserve this review! (and I noticed the plane part c; )
I am truly in love with this story. You are such a good writer! And you update often. For that, you deserve this review! (and I noticed the plane part c; )