5/20 c1 5andysanime
Awww, the fluff! I love the fluff! 3 XD

1/20 c1 Wintress
LOL

LOL.

a bit corny but i loved this sdfl;jksdfl;ksf

Wally is adorable. hehehe Lol. Robin this robin that
(I already know how amazing he is, it's immeasurable)

10/21/2012 c1 2kuromi123
I love the fluff, its so fluff-tastic! XD

7/3/2012 c1 14XxFallingxAngelxX
This was so sweet

I squealed while reading it, which is not normal in me, I'm usually a very serious person :D

I think this was great, don't be mean about your own writing :( I mean I've read some of those author's stuff and (I don't remember everything perfect) but even if they're good, you're good too :D

I know my opinion is not the most important but you made me smile a lot so that's a win :P (celebrate small victories ;))

Anyway I said I'd read your stories so I am , though I'm starting with some one-shots because I have to leave in a couple of hours so I can't read stuff that's long, because i won't want to stop and then I'll be late LOL XD

I really liked it though, your fluff is awesome! Robin couldn't even tell Wally to stop because that treacherous redhead kept turning everything he said and making it cute XD

And how Wally talked about their relationship was so funny, he sounded like a kid on Christmas bragging about his presents and poor team having to hear the guy dream out loud all day about his boyfriend xP and Superboy was so...Superboy on his text, it was just awesome :P

I also like how you showed their relationship, they just seemed so happy that the reader can actually feel it

Anyway, I'm not good at grammar, spelling and all that stuff, you know I don't even see my own mistakes, but I hardly think you'd make any so I have nothing to report on that :D

I loved this one-shot and I've got no complaints really, I hope you understand that's not just me being nice but me being honest :)

also, favorite part: -"KF, as sweet as I think that is," Wally blushed (...)-

I loved it because I thought: that's so sweet XD and then Robin said it besides, I love Wally blushing he's so cute LOL

sorry I couldn't give you and analysis like the ones you always gives me but I'm not that good at stuff like that, I only know how to say how much i liked it :S

Well, bye for now, I'll go search for another of your fics I can read right now :D

12/3/2011 c1 212FrankandJoe3
Okay, I wanted to draw fanart so I be creeping through your page. I saw this, saw it had 10 reviews but my name wasn't in them. *LE GASP* So I had to review :)

I can /totally/ see Wally bragging about his little Dicky boy to everyone. Even more in character is how Dick's a little pissy about it (: ~LOVE IT~

I love how Dick's kind of mad at Wally, yet HE kisses his ginger. I'd think that the ginger would kiss him for forgiveness (:

Heh, under-zealous (: Wally rocks with the word play, but only with his little boyfreeeyyyuuunnddd...

"No need to waste my texts." I thought Wally'd be like, "OH! So you think I'm a waste?" then Dick would freak out and be like, "NO! NO! A-Ah!" :3 Sorry...

"/Thiiiiiis/ much." I died 'aww'ing. Dad had to revive me, but only after he declared my room an official hell hole that needed to be shut down for safety reasons.

"Too much zeal!" XD

LOVE IT! But I'm not surprised. I have strep and you made me scream. My throat hurts now, but it's worth it! I'm meantioned in the end! :'D

10/31/2011 c1 25Don'tMessWithAFangirl
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE~! So perfect!

10/29/2011 c1 2Sammy1792
Wally's crazy enthusiasm kills me! Love it! :D

10/27/2011 c1 25Kiwisilence
"...some nice KF/Rob mediocrity": I'm just wondering - do you enjoy writing the pairing or do you at times feel forced into writing it? Either way, the end result is always good.

Once again (I mentioned this in my review for your AU non-superhero fic "Affection: Public or Private?"), I enjoy the overall positive fluff with darker edges (if a viewer want to read that much into the lines). Wally's "zeal in everything" could be a depressed Wally masking his inner emotions by defining and obsessing over his relationship with Robin. The stability of Robin and his' happy relationship could allow Wally to forget his faults/problems, whether it's his obsessive zeal, homelife, etc. Fanfiction allows readers to put their own spins on Young Justice, but with your writing, your readers could read their own spin on your stories if they didn't like fluff (but honestly, who doesn't?)

Anyways, Wally's zealotry over his relationship was in-character (even if canon Wally will never even become bi-curious and at least experiment with his friend the Pied Piper in the comics).

Conner's actions were hilarious: "I got this from Conner, he finally didn't break his cell phone when texting, 'Robin, is it normal for Wally to only talk about besides your crazy escapades to the zoo?'" When Robin says that Wally gives Batman details...(oh my mind is racing. Lol).

Thanks for the shoutout :) You won't believe me that your work is above mediocre (which it is far better), but I think we can establish that your writing is way above YJ Mary Sues and fics with poor grammar/spelling. Those two categories are a huge percentage of fics, so I think I can say you're better than average (well, I'll say you're way better than average; otherwise, I wouldn't be still reviewing).

Thanks for cranking out a fic despite your pseudo-hiatus.