for Leader of Men5/9 c2 
7Shujin1
I sincerely hope you consider continuing this. It is a very unique premise, promises to have long reaching implications and is well written.
7Shujin1I sincerely hope you consider continuing this. It is a very unique premise, promises to have long reaching implications and is well written.
4/1 c2 anon
Very good!
Very good!
5/30/2012 c2 Wraith
Like it, keep going.
Like it, keep going.
2/22/2012 c1 8The King in White
I'm pretty glad that I checked out your profile after you reviewed on my story.
This is pretty damn awesome.
I read a couple of weeks back a story in which Itachi was chosen for Godaime Hokage, and I've been mulling over Sasuke-Hokage for a while, but to actually see that someone has published it is pretty sweet.
Looking forward to your next update.
8The King in WhiteI'm pretty glad that I checked out your profile after you reviewed on my story.
This is pretty damn awesome.
I read a couple of weeks back a story in which Itachi was chosen for Godaime Hokage, and I've been mulling over Sasuke-Hokage for a while, but to actually see that someone has published it is pretty sweet.
Looking forward to your next update.
2/21/2012 c1 Sara
Hi!
This is so promising! I hope you will write more soon!
I am also curious why you 'get rid off' Sakura so quickly? Will she come back into the story at one point or another (even if she is not a shinobi anymore)? Will there be a ceremony for Naruto? What will the other rooky think about all that (Naruto's death, Sasuke's special training, his engagment with Kurenai)? What is Kakashi's feeling (shouldn't he be devastated for letting his student died)?
So please, keep writing, I am very curious about where this is going!
Sara
Hi!
This is so promising! I hope you will write more soon!
I am also curious why you 'get rid off' Sakura so quickly? Will she come back into the story at one point or another (even if she is not a shinobi anymore)? Will there be a ceremony for Naruto? What will the other rooky think about all that (Naruto's death, Sasuke's special training, his engagment with Kurenai)? What is Kakashi's feeling (shouldn't he be devastated for letting his student died)?
So please, keep writing, I am very curious about where this is going!
Sara
11/12/2011 c1 4Taijen
Im very impressed with this idea, but i feel like it lacked some emotion. Even if Sasuke hasn't known Naruto that long, Sasuke could have elected more depression. I felt Naruto's death was anticlimatic,I couldn't sense the burning determantion as he died. It was like bam and that's all. But I hope you contiune with this fic.
4TaijenIm very impressed with this idea, but i feel like it lacked some emotion. Even if Sasuke hasn't known Naruto that long, Sasuke could have elected more depression. I felt Naruto's death was anticlimatic,I couldn't sense the burning determantion as he died. It was like bam and that's all. But I hope you contiune with this fic.
10/28/2011 c1 00-night-eyes-00
to start off with i was unsure of the premise of this story. now that i have read the beginning i am really excited to read lots more. love it, hope to read more soon.
to start off with i was unsure of the premise of this story. now that i have read the beginning i am really excited to read lots more. love it, hope to read more soon.