for Anniversary9/27/2012 c1 
8Zonex Krypton
Umm, there are fractures in the sentences but its a cute plot I love the fact that she made him wear a BEAR Earring. XD
8Zonex KryptonUmm, there are fractures in the sentences but its a cute plot I love the fact that she made him wear a BEAR Earring. XD
11/13/2011 c1 1joodi
Wooow, I never thought I'd see a FudoFuyu fic! I liked reading Fudou's inner thoughts and the whole premise was really cute :)
...But I would suggest getting a beta reader or having someone help you with editing. I found the sudden shifts in verb tense to be a bit jarring along with the occasional run-on sentences...
I hope you'll write more FudouFuyu fics hehe :)
1joodiWooow, I never thought I'd see a FudoFuyu fic! I liked reading Fudou's inner thoughts and the whole premise was really cute :)
...But I would suggest getting a beta reader or having someone help you with editing. I found the sudden shifts in verb tense to be a bit jarring along with the occasional run-on sentences...
I hope you'll write more FudouFuyu fics hehe :)
10/29/2011 c1 7TheKazemaruSiblings
Isabella: Ahh nice story
Kazemaru: your not going to cry
Isabella: no
Everyone: few
7TheKazemaruSiblingsIsabella: Ahh nice story
Kazemaru: your not going to cry
Isabella: no
Everyone: few