for Domino Effect2/24/2012 c3 
2sarkon
Now you mentioned the divide. This has fallout newvegas written all over it. And I like it.
2sarkonNow you mentioned the divide. This has fallout newvegas written all over it. And I like it.
11/20/2011 c9 Proudfanatic8844
okay, now this is exactly how I expected this to play out... FINALLY, SOMETHING I CAN ACTUALLY GUESS CORRECTLY IN YOUR STORIES!
sorry just needed to express a triumph against you, finally. I guessed everything except the destination, and also, I guessed the Lake of Origin was another access point
love the installation, and cannot wait to read more
okay, now this is exactly how I expected this to play out... FINALLY, SOMETHING I CAN ACTUALLY GUESS CORRECTLY IN YOUR STORIES!
sorry just needed to express a triumph against you, finally. I guessed everything except the destination, and also, I guessed the Lake of Origin was another access point
love the installation, and cannot wait to read more
11/7/2011 c9 Qteammuscle
Once again, great story. I cannot wait for more. Also, the lake of origin didn't swear so much before did it? Either way, I prefer when it does. Nothing beats being cussed out by a lake.
Once again, great story. I cannot wait for more. Also, the lake of origin didn't swear so much before did it? Either way, I prefer when it does. Nothing beats being cussed out by a lake.
11/7/2011 c9 The Black Okami
lol gotta love the little throwbacks like fluttershys squeaking and Lilys freaking out never gets old lol, can't wait to start on your next story=P
lol gotta love the little throwbacks like fluttershys squeaking and Lilys freaking out never gets old lol, can't wait to start on your next story=P
11/6/2011 c8 1skelitinor
Another cuss-heavy chapter. I am not complaining though. I like the interesting twists even though nothing really happened this chapter...It would be really wierd if Fluttershy would start randomly killing ponys and then raping their dead bodies for fun. What about Suprise though? What role will she play in the rest of the story?...yeh
1skelitinorAnother cuss-heavy chapter. I am not complaining though. I like the interesting twists even though nothing really happened this chapter...It would be really wierd if Fluttershy would start randomly killing ponys and then raping their dead bodies for fun. What about Suprise though? What role will she play in the rest of the story?...yeh
11/6/2011 c7 3sinthehedgehog
well the lake seems to be in a lousy mood today. and no matter how i think about it that just doesn't sound right.
3sinthehedgehogwell the lake seems to be in a lousy mood today. and no matter how i think about it that just doesn't sound right.
11/6/2011 c7 The Black Okami
Stoooooop teasing me! How could you stop Surprises arc right there I mean you know how much I wanna see what happens to her! Also it seems strange to see Pinkie get beat up, usually,even in the show, she is crazy fast and strong. It also seems the future changed again considering everyones, happy ending is looking very different now. Though I don't have to say this to you, update soon, I'll be reading.
Stoooooop teasing me! How could you stop Surprises arc right there I mean you know how much I wanna see what happens to her! Also it seems strange to see Pinkie get beat up, usually,even in the show, she is crazy fast and strong. It also seems the future changed again considering everyones, happy ending is looking very different now. Though I don't have to say this to you, update soon, I'll be reading.
11/5/2011 c7 Guest
Wow, this was another great chapter Wheller. And very "cuss heavy" if I do say so myself. All in all it was very...normal, I guess. Sorry for the review being so short but I'm writing this from my DSI...yeah.
Wow, this was another great chapter Wheller. And very "cuss heavy" if I do say so myself. All in all it was very...normal, I guess. Sorry for the review being so short but I'm writing this from my DSI...yeah.
11/5/2011 c6 The Black Okami
Why are the happiest of ponys always hurt the most.. Somehow I doubt surprise is all immortal anymore either. What I know for sure is you better not kill her off, or else. Anyway you know the drill update soon, I'll be reading.
Why are the happiest of ponys always hurt the most.. Somehow I doubt surprise is all immortal anymore either. What I know for sure is you better not kill her off, or else. Anyway you know the drill update soon, I'll be reading.
11/4/2011 c6 DreadedCandiru2
Great; not only has Vinyl found the Surprise in Fluttershy's place, Zephyr/Legion is trying to kill Derpy again.
Great; not only has Vinyl found the Surprise in Fluttershy's place, Zephyr/Legion is trying to kill Derpy again.
11/4/2011 c5 1skelitinor
Another great chaper Wheller. You honestly amaze me at every extent. You just keep havin to post chapers that make me pass out from sheer skill and amazing-ness. In my eyes you officialy have no one that can rival your writing skill. I say this with complete truth, I am not crossing my fingers when I say this. So as always, blah blah blah. Skelitinor blah blah blah. yadda yadda OUT!
1skelitinorAnother great chaper Wheller. You honestly amaze me at every extent. You just keep havin to post chapers that make me pass out from sheer skill and amazing-ness. In my eyes you officialy have no one that can rival your writing skill. I say this with complete truth, I am not crossing my fingers when I say this. So as always, blah blah blah. Skelitinor blah blah blah. yadda yadda OUT!
11/4/2011 c5 The Black Okami
Well pips is evil, can't say I'm surprised with everypony from the outside having their own agenda, though I can't imagine what his could be. Anyway update soon I'll be reading.
Well pips is evil, can't say I'm surprised with everypony from the outside having their own agenda, though I can't imagine what his could be. Anyway update soon I'll be reading.
11/3/2011 c4 3sinthehedgehog
Murphy's law is now in effect. Also vinyl just can't seem to get a break!
3sinthehedgehogMurphy's law is now in effect. Also vinyl just can't seem to get a break!