for Monsters Create Monsters7/11/2012 c1 
17Nispedana
This was a great chapter. :D I thought you started the story pretty well and it contained pretty interesting characterizations. Hehe. I'll read the rest soon
17NispedanaThis was a great chapter. :D I thought you started the story pretty well and it contained pretty interesting characterizations. Hehe. I'll read the rest soon
5/23/2012 c2 Dane Kemp
Wow. The Joker was really well written-I felt he was from a movie/comic book. The fact that he talked in a circle to screw with Jonathan made it sound really authentic. The scene with Batman was really frustrating-the spoilsport. Also, the guard and his story was really touching.
Again, only one or two spelling errors. I also felt the Batman scene was a tad quick, but what do I know? Very good story!
Wow. The Joker was really well written-I felt he was from a movie/comic book. The fact that he talked in a circle to screw with Jonathan made it sound really authentic. The scene with Batman was really frustrating-the spoilsport. Also, the guard and his story was really touching.
Again, only one or two spelling errors. I also felt the Batman scene was a tad quick, but what do I know? Very good story!
5/23/2012 c1 Dane Kemp
Too lazy to log in XP
This was very nice. Jonathon seemed very realistic as a shy human with "no life." It was very nice when Jessica said that she would go out with him-twas very touching. It was quite sad when we found out Jessica was dead though. Tbh, I found the exchange between the personelle from the prison and Jonathon a little humorous.
I think the only thing wrong with it was that there were a few spelling errors (though I'm guessing you've probably been notified of those by now).
I'm off to read chapter 2!
Too lazy to log in XP
This was very nice. Jonathon seemed very realistic as a shy human with "no life." It was very nice when Jessica said that she would go out with him-twas very touching. It was quite sad when we found out Jessica was dead though. Tbh, I found the exchange between the personelle from the prison and Jonathon a little humorous.
I think the only thing wrong with it was that there were a few spelling errors (though I'm guessing you've probably been notified of those by now).
I'm off to read chapter 2!
3/14/2012 c2 9Dzuljeta
Hey :)
Batman turns out to be the only fandom I am familiar with among those you are writing for...
And I am so happy to have taken time to read it! It's very good. Your characterisations are wonderful, I also enjoyed your writing style.
To say the least, this was a great story. And it absolutely deserves more reviews. :P
9DzuljetaHey :)
Batman turns out to be the only fandom I am familiar with among those you are writing for...
And I am so happy to have taken time to read it! It's very good. Your characterisations are wonderful, I also enjoyed your writing style.
To say the least, this was a great story. And it absolutely deserves more reviews. :P
12/1/2011 c2 17KittiofDOOM
*fangirl squeal*
Now I've gotten that out my system. God you write Joker so well it's creepy, I can actually hear him saying his lines in my head. It's very very creepy hahahahaha. And Crane, I love the way you wrote him as well, so very well done. I'm jealous of your writing abilities! An amazing present, thank you!
Ai.
17KittiofDOOM*fangirl squeal*
Now I've gotten that out my system. God you write Joker so well it's creepy, I can actually hear him saying his lines in my head. It's very very creepy hahahahaha. And Crane, I love the way you wrote him as well, so very well done. I'm jealous of your writing abilities! An amazing present, thank you!
Ai.
11/4/2011 c1 KittiofDOOM
This. Is amazing! It kinda reminds me of my writing style a little hahaha. But I absolutely love it. Thank you so much!
And yes, you should definately continue (not bias as all)
also...Mr Hoosan, I wonder where i've heard that name before :P
Thank you once again =D
This. Is amazing! It kinda reminds me of my writing style a little hahaha. But I absolutely love it. Thank you so much!
And yes, you should definately continue (not bias as all)
also...Mr Hoosan, I wonder where i've heard that name before :P
Thank you once again =D