for going back was impossible12/18/2011 c7 
35Colin Creevey
It's times like this when I wish we could put three genres. This would have been perfect as a romance/drama/tragedy kind of story. Really, well done. I really, really liked this story and I wish there were more like this.
You've done a good job and I can really tell you have improved during the three months since Brighter. Well done. I might read the later ones some other time but this was a good reading day for me. Well done.
Yours,
Colin Creevey
35Colin CreeveyIt's times like this when I wish we could put three genres. This would have been perfect as a romance/drama/tragedy kind of story. Really, well done. I really, really liked this story and I wish there were more like this.
You've done a good job and I can really tell you have improved during the three months since Brighter. Well done. I might read the later ones some other time but this was a good reading day for me. Well done.
Yours,
Colin Creevey
12/18/2011 c5 Colin Creevey
Ok, THANK YOU! I just loved the poem at the beginning! Aladdin. Oh, one of my favorite Disney classics. Thanks for that. Oh, you made my day with that. Seriously. I hope it goes well for them. I'm so into it now.
Ok, THANK YOU! I just loved the poem at the beginning! Aladdin. Oh, one of my favorite Disney classics. Thanks for that. Oh, you made my day with that. Seriously. I hope it goes well for them. I'm so into it now.
12/18/2011 c4 Colin Creevey
Ooh, which cousin did he kiss? Wow, do I necessarily want to know wehere this goes now? You got me hooked? Most people would complain at the shortness of the chapters but for this kind of story, it really is the right length. Well done.
Ooh, which cousin did he kiss? Wow, do I necessarily want to know wehere this goes now? You got me hooked? Most people would complain at the shortness of the chapters but for this kind of story, it really is the right length. Well done.
12/18/2011 c3 Colin Creevey
You know what I really like? The poems at the beginning. You remind me of Cassandra Clare and what she does before every chapter. (if you don't know Clare, rest assured this is a real compliment.) So good for them to be together. I'd like to ee where this relationship goes.
You know what I really like? The poems at the beginning. You remind me of Cassandra Clare and what she does before every chapter. (if you don't know Clare, rest assured this is a real compliment.) So good for them to be together. I'd like to ee where this relationship goes.
12/18/2011 c2 Colin Creevey
I can see the relationship developing which is how it should be. It's not a given anymore. You see it developing. I like it that way.
I can see the relationship developing which is how it should be. It's not a given anymore. You see it developing. I like it that way.
12/18/2011 c1 Colin Creevey
Better. I read your earlier story Brighter and I liked it. Now I read this and I can tell a lot of improvement occured. I like this much more. Not only that but I like the Lorcan/Lucy ship.
Better. I read your earlier story Brighter and I liked it. Now I read this and I can tell a lot of improvement occured. I like this much more. Not only that but I like the Lorcan/Lucy ship.
12/5/2011 c7 14theatre-geek17
I'm normally a LucyLysander fan but this was incredibly well written. I really loved it. It was such a great story with such a sad ending. It was so horrible to have to read about Lorcan losing Lucy. Great job with all the different emotions.
14theatre-geek17I'm normally a LucyLysander fan but this was incredibly well written. I really loved it. It was such a great story with such a sad ending. It was so horrible to have to read about Lorcan losing Lucy. Great job with all the different emotions.
11/29/2011 c7 279chasingafterstarlight
Oh my gosh, this is just beautiful. Can I have your writing talent or?
Because honestly, this was fabulous. Your writing is amazing and it created so many metaphors in my mind and I just I can't
You've made this pairing so wonderful and wow the angsty tone of this
AMAZING JOB NEVER STOP WRITING KK BYE
SORRY IT'S 2 AM
NOTHING MAKES SENSE
279chasingafterstarlightOh my gosh, this is just beautiful. Can I have your writing talent or?
Because honestly, this was fabulous. Your writing is amazing and it created so many metaphors in my mind and I just I can't
You've made this pairing so wonderful and wow the angsty tone of this
AMAZING JOB NEVER STOP WRITING KK BYE
SORRY IT'S 2 AM
NOTHING MAKES SENSE
11/28/2011 c7 375a mountain of gideon's scones
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL HER, VISA!
you know i love this.
it was amazing - all of it - and i absolutely adored it alll!
&hearts
you're amazing, you know that? xxx
375a mountain of gideon's sconesWHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL HER, VISA!
you know i love this.
it was amazing - all of it - and i absolutely adored it alll!
&hearts
you're amazing, you know that? xxx
11/27/2011 c2 39fabricated fantasies
Ohh, my darling this was really gorgeous. I've read it twice now, and it's still amazing; a poignant insight into Lorcan's changing feelings for Lucy.
It feels really natural - a lot of authors tend to overdramaticise the moment they realise they like the other person, but this flowed really well. You had some excellent characterisation as well, which was lovely to see.
And the first line is just pure magic: "Suddenly, she wasn't only Lucy Weasley." There's so much promise in those first few lines, it's gorgeous.
Great job, and keep writing! =]
39fabricated fantasiesOhh, my darling this was really gorgeous. I've read it twice now, and it's still amazing; a poignant insight into Lorcan's changing feelings for Lucy.
It feels really natural - a lot of authors tend to overdramaticise the moment they realise they like the other person, but this flowed really well. You had some excellent characterisation as well, which was lovely to see.
And the first line is just pure magic: "Suddenly, she wasn't only Lucy Weasley." There's so much promise in those first few lines, it's gorgeous.
Great job, and keep writing! =]
11/27/2011 c7 17lydia martins
This was amazing!
How do you write like this? asdgfh you put so much into so little, and you make the reader really feel for lorc!
c'est parfait!
17lydia martinsThis was amazing!
How do you write like this? asdgfh you put so much into so little, and you make the reader really feel for lorc!
c'est parfait!
11/27/2011 c6 lydia martins
Wow. That was reallyreally dark but asdfghj i loved it!
Why does everyone kill off Lucy?
Wow. That was reallyreally dark but asdfghj i loved it!
Why does everyone kill off Lucy?
11/16/2011 c1 12allie's hope
OMG! I LOVE LUCYLORCAN.
and what better way to love them then their first encounter? especially in the brilliant stylings of you :)
The detailed imagery and the quiet dialogue was perfect and they complimented each other very well.
I'm intrigued to see how their relationship blossoms and I cant wait to read one &hearts
~Allie
12allie's hopeOMG! I LOVE LUCYLORCAN.
and what better way to love them then their first encounter? especially in the brilliant stylings of you :)
The detailed imagery and the quiet dialogue was perfect and they complimented each other very well.
I'm intrigued to see how their relationship blossoms and I cant wait to read one &hearts
~Allie
11/9/2011 c2 2General Confusion
Fantastic work as usual Lowi! great flow and great detail...
Vicky is a good beta to have...she's good with grammar and spelling...I'm supposed to say this...or she'll hurt me over pm ;) jk
2General ConfusionFantastic work as usual Lowi! great flow and great detail...
Vicky is a good beta to have...she's good with grammar and spelling...I'm supposed to say this...or she'll hurt me over pm ;) jk