for Soccer Practice11/13/2011 c3 Hazmatt
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! That had to be distracting! I hope Emily's eye doesn't hurt for too long, and that Lucy learns her lesson!
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! That had to be distracting! I hope Emily's eye doesn't hurt for too long, and that Lucy learns her lesson!
11/13/2011 c2 Hazmatt
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! It would suck to get interrupted when they did! I hope they can sort out this misunderstanding!
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope everything works out! It would suck to get interrupted when they did! I hope they can sort out this misunderstanding!
11/12/2011 c4 
1AmeliaHoran
Alright so 1 that ws funny and sweet all in one. 2 I have an idea for a sequel to this one: you could do it in like 3 years from now, hotch and Emily, JJ and Rossi are married and they would go out for dinner or an outing somewhere and they would run into the soccer moms. Just an idea. It would be fun to see how that plays.
Thanks for the story!
1AmeliaHoranAlright so 1 that ws funny and sweet all in one. 2 I have an idea for a sequel to this one: you could do it in like 3 years from now, hotch and Emily, JJ and Rossi are married and they would go out for dinner or an outing somewhere and they would run into the soccer moms. Just an idea. It would be fun to see how that plays.
Thanks for the story!
11/12/2011 c4 146greengirl82
well it was a good story, a little over the top at the end with Lucy and the gun, but i still enjoyed it all the same
146greengirl82well it was a good story, a little over the top at the end with Lucy and the gun, but i still enjoyed it all the same
11/8/2011 c3 3mummacass
I think HOtch is going to tear strips off Lucy when he finds out what she did to Emily!
3mummacassI think HOtch is going to tear strips off Lucy when he finds out what she did to Emily!
11/8/2011 c3 HGRHfan35
This was my favourite part:
"I know. That's Ms. Emily and Ms. JJ. I think my daddy likes Ms. Emily. And they were doing the mouth thing. Yuck!" He frowned, looking just like his dad.
Teddy gave Jack an exaggerated look, "That's what big people do! My mommy and daddy do it all the time. It's so yucky. I'm never gonna do that to any girl ever!"
Jack giggled, "Me too! Girls are so yucky!"
This really made me LOL
This was my favourite part:
"I know. That's Ms. Emily and Ms. JJ. I think my daddy likes Ms. Emily. And they were doing the mouth thing. Yuck!" He frowned, looking just like his dad.
Teddy gave Jack an exaggerated look, "That's what big people do! My mommy and daddy do it all the time. It's so yucky. I'm never gonna do that to any girl ever!"
Jack giggled, "Me too! Girls are so yucky!"
This really made me LOL