for It Doesn't Have To Be Perfect10/2/2012 c1 
3SithKnight-Galen
Very nice piece, showing us what a perfect life for Natsuki might be like. Too bad it was caused by a traumatic and near fatal accident. I am glad that she was able to awaken from her coma and that her loved ones really never did give up on her, no matter how long it took. I am curious, was the more to this, post her waking up...and just how long was Natsuki under, and what kind of ramifications could that have, not just for Natsuki, but also for her extended circle and replacement family (it seems that Mai was kind of shaken up, and Shizuru was falling apart without Natsuki around)
3SithKnight-GalenVery nice piece, showing us what a perfect life for Natsuki might be like. Too bad it was caused by a traumatic and near fatal accident. I am glad that she was able to awaken from her coma and that her loved ones really never did give up on her, no matter how long it took. I am curious, was the more to this, post her waking up...and just how long was Natsuki under, and what kind of ramifications could that have, not just for Natsuki, but also for her extended circle and replacement family (it seems that Mai was kind of shaken up, and Shizuru was falling apart without Natsuki around)
4/13/2012 c1 jo-Kaon17
this is really good one shot..its totally perfect,, i like the idea of Natsuki having dreamed of a alter world where everything she want is in it..,,and yet wake up feel content of what she already have in front of her..this is too romantic, and thanks author for sharing:)
this is really good one shot..its totally perfect,, i like the idea of Natsuki having dreamed of a alter world where everything she want is in it..,,and yet wake up feel content of what she already have in front of her..this is too romantic, and thanks author for sharing:)
11/7/2011 c1 20ZonaRose
Wow. This was one great one-shot.
I will be looking for more from you.
Keep up the good work.
In Love & Light,
Zona Rose @};-
20ZonaRoseWow. This was one great one-shot.
I will be looking for more from you.
Keep up the good work.
In Love & Light,
Zona Rose @};-
11/7/2011 c1 nhmjkiuy
this story is beatiful
good job
kisses
this story is beatiful
good job
kisses
11/7/2011 c1 6BuRiChiFaN
i never thought that this fic would bring me to tears. T_T i thought at first it was just a simple romance w/ some odd italicized inserts that has nothing to do w/ the scenes. but when i began to pick up what's really goin on, i began to cry. T_T i read the story twice,to savor those important yet heart-breaking italicized clues. DX
i really did cry during the last parts. the title really fits the story well.its message touched me so
thank you!
6BuRiChiFaNi never thought that this fic would bring me to tears. T_T i thought at first it was just a simple romance w/ some odd italicized inserts that has nothing to do w/ the scenes. but when i began to pick up what's really goin on, i began to cry. T_T i read the story twice,to savor those important yet heart-breaking italicized clues. DX
i really did cry during the last parts. the title really fits the story well.its message touched me so
thank you!
11/6/2011 c1 1Wolf Brigade
Wow, very nice story. While I was reading, I was trying to figure out what was happening. At first I thought the italicized parts were the current time and the rest was a flashback. But I liked where you steered the story more than my own theory. I also enjoyed the fact that you didn't totally demonize Takeda like a lot of authors seem to do. I don't think he's a bad guy, but he's definitely no Shizuru. Overall, good story and I liked how you made a time skip happen after every italicize part. Besides a few small grammar issues, my only complaint is that this isn't longer!
1Wolf BrigadeWow, very nice story. While I was reading, I was trying to figure out what was happening. At first I thought the italicized parts were the current time and the rest was a flashback. But I liked where you steered the story more than my own theory. I also enjoyed the fact that you didn't totally demonize Takeda like a lot of authors seem to do. I don't think he's a bad guy, but he's definitely no Shizuru. Overall, good story and I liked how you made a time skip happen after every italicize part. Besides a few small grammar issues, my only complaint is that this isn't longer!
11/6/2011 c1 25SulliMike23
Wow, that was beautiful Kona-chan! It was a real tear-jerker to see Natsuki like that.
25SulliMike23Wow, that was beautiful Kona-chan! It was a real tear-jerker to see Natsuki like that.
11/6/2011 c1 1Iuterpi
Super cute short story this was. Since the beginning I kind of figured it had to do with a "Perfect" reality for Natsuki but it was until done really good. The little bits about everyone watching over her it was what made the story look really special. Congrats in another really well done story. Take care.
1IuterpiSuper cute short story this was. Since the beginning I kind of figured it had to do with a "Perfect" reality for Natsuki but it was until done really good. The little bits about everyone watching over her it was what made the story look really special. Congrats in another really well done story. Take care.