for The Paradigm of Paradines7/4/2012 c2 
17Dragoon-Yue
"'Yes Dylan, I believe you did.'"
Perfect. That line was just perfect.
Just a quick note, though: Beka was the captain of her own ship before she joined up with Dylan and technically she still is. Since Harper, Trance and Rev Bem were all originally a part of her crew when she found the Andromeda Beka's probably used to giving orders. If anything I remember that it took her a little while get used to TAKING orders rather than giving them.
17Dragoon-Yue"'Yes Dylan, I believe you did.'"
Perfect. That line was just perfect.
Just a quick note, though: Beka was the captain of her own ship before she joined up with Dylan and technically she still is. Since Harper, Trance and Rev Bem were all originally a part of her crew when she found the Andromeda Beka's probably used to giving orders. If anything I remember that it took her a little while get used to TAKING orders rather than giving them.
11/6/2011 c1 max
cool idea. good start
cool idea. good start