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for Trysts in the Sunlit Garden

7/29/2012 c1 S
Aww... I like this side of Utena and Anthy. Need the lighthearted coy side too of fanfiction... not just angst! This is how I'd imagine them really, sometimes.
11/15/2011 c1 5DandelionKing
The characters felt very ooc. I had a hard time connecting with them.
11/10/2011 c1 46Kenneth Black
XD Sweet! I love how you somehow made this 'mystery person' NOT Utena, even though it WAS her. There was just that subtle change in Utena's character at lunch-time that you were wondering, 'Who WAS that Anthy was with?'. Nice reusal of the sentences, you ended it with a twisted bang. ^^ Keep it up! =3
11/9/2011 c1 James Birdsong
Great. Really wonderful
11/8/2011 c1 9mochiusagi
So the person was Utena after all? Great job though!

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