for Legacy4/30 c4 Dan1234567890
Some mistakes here and there, but the story was great!
It feels good to replace the official ending with something different and more...pleasant!
Some mistakes here and there, but the story was great!
It feels good to replace the official ending with something different and more...pleasant!
3/28 c2 
5Ichigome
Thanks for doing this one. I cried the entire last few chapters hoping she would changed her mind and she just... didn't. Neither of them did and it nearly broke my heart.
5IchigomeThanks for doing this one. I cried the entire last few chapters hoping she would changed her mind and she just... didn't. Neither of them did and it nearly broke my heart.
1/24 c5 1McCangel
I just wanna say thanks a ton for doing this. This helps put my mind at ease from that series. I loved that series but the end...wasn't the kind f end you want for a series. It's better for the end of a book. So thank you, and I really like everything you've done with this so far
1McCangelI just wanna say thanks a ton for doing this. This helps put my mind at ease from that series. I loved that series but the end...wasn't the kind f end you want for a series. It's better for the end of a book. So thank you, and I really like everything you've done with this so far
1/17 c4 2EmlynMara
Much better ending. I like that they mated without intending to. It was an extremely intimate thing for them to have shared. And then to have gone off in different directions for who knows how long - so wrong. Interesting to have Arya maintain the distance even though she knew what had happened. At least Eragon could plead ignorance. I guess keeping her from knowing about the egg is kind of balanced from keeping him knowing they were mated, though somehow I think her omission was the greater. Neat scene about the baby, although I'm not sure I can picture Arya saying she's pregnant - with child, yes, pregnant, not so much. Lovely story.
2EmlynMaraMuch better ending. I like that they mated without intending to. It was an extremely intimate thing for them to have shared. And then to have gone off in different directions for who knows how long - so wrong. Interesting to have Arya maintain the distance even though she knew what had happened. At least Eragon could plead ignorance. I guess keeping her from knowing about the egg is kind of balanced from keeping him knowing they were mated, though somehow I think her omission was the greater. Neat scene about the baby, although I'm not sure I can picture Arya saying she's pregnant - with child, yes, pregnant, not so much. Lovely story.
12/29/2012 c1 5firecewolf
To answer your question about the getting drunk/high scene with eragn and arya, I believe that he was showng that i the midst of a serious war, Eragon and Arya could have a normal moment that did't involve them fighting for their lives. It showed a different side of Arya AND Eragon.
5firecewolfTo answer your question about the getting drunk/high scene with eragn and arya, I believe that he was showng that i the midst of a serious war, Eragon and Arya could have a normal moment that did't involve them fighting for their lives. It showed a different side of Arya AND Eragon.
10/20/2012 c4 9Uchiha-Dani-Uzumaki
Perfect.
Now i can say that i love Inheritance Cycle books. These chapters (and the story in them) were "that thing" that i couldn't find in Paolini's book. You completed the story :D thaaanks!
I loved the way you wrote Arya's feelings. I could understand when you said that it was really difficult to describe Arya's emotions or even her behavior... she has a way of being so different xP (she's an elf...)
You're completely right about Eragon's sex situations. He's not made to do such things as sex... he's sooo an inocent guy! xD -of course Arya's not. She's a pervert girl ;)-
Saphira, you're pervert too. Can't you stop doing dirty things with Firnen, can you? xD i'm joking, do it as much as you want guys... you should restore the dragon race.
I leave the review here because i'll read the Arya's and Eragons's daughter story later.
I really liked this story :)
Kisses!
9Uchiha-Dani-UzumakiPerfect.
Now i can say that i love Inheritance Cycle books. These chapters (and the story in them) were "that thing" that i couldn't find in Paolini's book. You completed the story :D thaaanks!
I loved the way you wrote Arya's feelings. I could understand when you said that it was really difficult to describe Arya's emotions or even her behavior... she has a way of being so different xP (she's an elf...)
You're completely right about Eragon's sex situations. He's not made to do such things as sex... he's sooo an inocent guy! xD -of course Arya's not. She's a pervert girl ;)-
Saphira, you're pervert too. Can't you stop doing dirty things with Firnen, can you? xD i'm joking, do it as much as you want guys... you should restore the dragon race.
I leave the review here because i'll read the Arya's and Eragons's daughter story later.
I really liked this story :)
Kisses!
9/2/2012 c5 bluesnitch
Liked the story a lot... much better ending than the book. Keep it up :)
Liked the story a lot... much better ending than the book. Keep it up :)
7/16/2012 c3 Guest
Well, that's a fast evolving relationship lol
Well, that's a fast evolving relationship lol
6/3/2012 c1 Sage Strike2
I feel your pain. When I got inheritance I brought it everywhere so I could get to the ending. I even brought it to Chili's once. I dont think anyone liked the way he ended it...
I feel your pain. When I got inheritance I brought it everywhere so I could get to the ending. I even brought it to Chili's once. I dont think anyone liked the way he ended it...