for Happy Birthday11/13/2011 c1 Bella Hearts
Very intense but that is a good thing loved it all around
Very intense but that is a good thing loved it all around
11/11/2011 c1 
81SkyMaiden
Okay, so not bad at all for your first lemon. Definitely could see where you put the effort and tried here. Then again it is your favorite couple and something you care about so when those components are there naturally things tend to work out. So the future lemons you have planned out should only be better from here on out. I loved the Lady/Vergil nod lol, good one. Those two whackjobs could and probably should be together. I see them working out. Loved my Mina-chan naturally, love goddess ahem, sex goddess indeed lol. Good luck with the future ones you have planned out. I'm sure they will only get better with the more practice you put in. Bravo, to you for getting your feet weet and trailing into unfamiliar territory its all we can do sometimes in life, try with our best foot forward.
81SkyMaidenOkay, so not bad at all for your first lemon. Definitely could see where you put the effort and tried here. Then again it is your favorite couple and something you care about so when those components are there naturally things tend to work out. So the future lemons you have planned out should only be better from here on out. I loved the Lady/Vergil nod lol, good one. Those two whackjobs could and probably should be together. I see them working out. Loved my Mina-chan naturally, love goddess ahem, sex goddess indeed lol. Good luck with the future ones you have planned out. I'm sure they will only get better with the more practice you put in. Bravo, to you for getting your feet weet and trailing into unfamiliar territory its all we can do sometimes in life, try with our best foot forward.
11/11/2011 c1 14AquaTonic
Wow, I don't know where to start! I'm so glad to be mentioned in your Author's Note :D Next, I'm so happy to read through this fic and felt the joy pushing through me. It is wonderful! You did great at the descriptions, the actions, and their intimate moments. It can sometimes be hard to get the exact detail, but you captured it! I simply can't wait for the next on you write either! I'm already at the edge of my seat waiting for more and having to re-read this! Fantastic, wonderful job!
14AquaTonicWow, I don't know where to start! I'm so glad to be mentioned in your Author's Note :D Next, I'm so happy to read through this fic and felt the joy pushing through me. It is wonderful! You did great at the descriptions, the actions, and their intimate moments. It can sometimes be hard to get the exact detail, but you captured it! I simply can't wait for the next on you write either! I'm already at the edge of my seat waiting for more and having to re-read this! Fantastic, wonderful job!