for trouble in paradise11/11/2011 c1 
15Hahli Nuva
Um, it was cool and all, but maybe you need to proofread it first. I see alot of updates that can be benefical to this story. Just check your grammer and use spell check, okay? Also, you can ask for a Beta Reader if you need one. They will look at your story and help you with it.
15Hahli NuvaUm, it was cool and all, but maybe you need to proofread it first. I see alot of updates that can be benefical to this story. Just check your grammer and use spell check, okay? Also, you can ask for a Beta Reader if you need one. They will look at your story and help you with it.
11/11/2011 c1 7dragon knight inferno
this is not review this is message i'll take question and answer them to best of my abilities you can pm or email me at and i will get to them as soon as i can
7dragon knight infernothis is not review this is message i'll take question and answer them to best of my abilities you can pm or email me at and i will get to them as soon as i can