for Cut Checking3/2 c4 Guest
:3 wow this is oe of the most well written fanfics I have read ever (I read tones!) Its so detailed and... adnd... ;w; just wow. I think if u were to do another chapter then it could be about what the other characters think of the relationship. Do kid and crona try to hide it? who finds out? :3 I really enjoyed this. Gonna tel mah friends and hope fo more X3.
:3 wow this is oe of the most well written fanfics I have read ever (I read tones!) Its so detailed and... adnd... ;w; just wow. I think if u were to do another chapter then it could be about what the other characters think of the relationship. Do kid and crona try to hide it? who finds out? :3 I really enjoyed this. Gonna tel mah friends and hope fo more X3.
2/25 c4 AloisTrancy215
This is a great story! You did an amazing job with it! One thing that I think you should consider is switching up the POVs in the chapter not every other chapter and repeating all the actions that had been already done... For story ideas you can just continue the days... Explaining how kid has to explain to maka about checking up on him for cuts instead of her... Maybe her walking in on them kissing... Let your imagination wander to the possibility of a love story :D 333 good luck and keep writing!
This is a great story! You did an amazing job with it! One thing that I think you should consider is switching up the POVs in the chapter not every other chapter and repeating all the actions that had been already done... For story ideas you can just continue the days... Explaining how kid has to explain to maka about checking up on him for cuts instead of her... Maybe her walking in on them kissing... Let your imagination wander to the possibility of a love story :D 333 good luck and keep writing!
2/25 c4 Small Lady
WOW :-)
WOW :-)
1/16 c4 
3mas-y-menos
heheh xD loved it. i think now you should do a bit where Crona a Kid sort of have a private affair and have to try to keep their relationship hidden from the otheree o3o yes...do that
3mas-y-menosheheh xD loved it. i think now you should do a bit where Crona a Kid sort of have a private affair and have to try to keep their relationship hidden from the otheree o3o yes...do that
1/16 c3 mas-y-menos
AMAZING. i was just a little weirded out by how fast it all went. one moment kid is checking crona for scars and the next there's fingering and climaxing O-O very good though 5 out of 5 stars
AMAZING. i was just a little weirded out by how fast it all went. one moment kid is checking crona for scars and the next there's fingering and climaxing O-O very good though 5 out of 5 stars
11/12/2012 c4 eline.smolders
this story is pretty good. i would love too read about the other finding out and maka being pissed off :-)
this story is pretty good. i would love too read about the other finding out and maka being pissed off :-)
11/11/2012 c4 1Don'tSleep
I would love to read more, like the aftermath of the lemon. :3 Maybe...Kid and Crona start dating and Maka, Soul, Patty, Liz, etc. are all like "What took you two so long?" or if it's angsty, all "What the **** happened?! We thought you were straight, Kid!" Please? O3O
1Don'tSleepI would love to read more, like the aftermath of the lemon. :3 Maybe...Kid and Crona start dating and Maka, Soul, Patty, Liz, etc. are all like "What took you two so long?" or if it's angsty, all "What the **** happened?! We thought you were straight, Kid!" Please? O3O
10/29/2012 c3 I'veWaitedSOLong
Yay! Update! It was really good!
Have you started writing the other chapter yet? If not, you have one day to start writing, or I shall find you, and force you to write until your hands fall off. And I do believe you'd like to keep your hands.
Yay! Update! It was really good!
Have you started writing the other chapter yet? If not, you have one day to start writing, or I shall find you, and force you to write until your hands fall off. And I do believe you'd like to keep your hands.