for Ricochet5/17 c40 zolahome
Great story! I only discovered Veronica Mars because of the kickstarter campaign and became obsessed! Thanks for writing this- I wasn't ready to give up on LoVe so your story helped! Can't wait to read the sequel. Thank you for sharing!
Great story! I only discovered Veronica Mars because of the kickstarter campaign and became obsessed! Thanks for writing this- I wasn't ready to give up on LoVe so your story helped! Can't wait to read the sequel. Thank you for sharing!
5/15 c21 zolahome
What a great chapter! I've been enjoying your whole story but this latest chapter was the best! You done a great job at capturing Logan's attitude. I could totally buy that Mrs. Navarro would insist on taking Logan home. Creative choice, excellent job!
What a great chapter! I've been enjoying your whole story but this latest chapter was the best! You done a great job at capturing Logan's attitude. I could totally buy that Mrs. Navarro would insist on taking Logan home. Creative choice, excellent job!
5/3 c8 
9Jenndifurry
Orson Scott Card wrote a slavic sleeping beauty that I also like but your right there's nothing like enders game.
9JenndifurryOrson Scott Card wrote a slavic sleeping beauty that I also like but your right there's nothing like enders game.
4/19 c41 HoistTheColours89
I just finished reading this story for the first time, and I must say, I couldn't stop reading!
Definitively one of my ultimate fav LoVe fics I've read so far, you really are one of the most talented writers on the fandom.
I really enjoyed reading it, thank you so much for sharing. :-)
I just finished reading this story for the first time, and I must say, I couldn't stop reading!
Definitively one of my ultimate fav LoVe fics I've read so far, you really are one of the most talented writers on the fandom.
I really enjoyed reading it, thank you so much for sharing. :-)
3/25 c41 Sunny2708
So glad you wrote this story, so happy I was "allowed" to read it.
Love your story, thank you very much for writing it!
So glad you wrote this story, so happy I was "allowed" to read it.
Love your story, thank you very much for writing it!
3/24 c38 Mischief101
I've read a lot of VM fanfics. And I wanted to let you know that this is one of my all time favorites. I could really picture all this happening. You really did a great job keeping true to the characters. Thank you for writing and sharing this story.
I've read a lot of VM fanfics. And I wanted to let you know that this is one of my all time favorites. I could really picture all this happening. You really did a great job keeping true to the characters. Thank you for writing and sharing this story.
3/17 c40 4runiechica
Just rediscovered this story and was excited to see it's finished. :) It was great, can't wait to read the sequel you are writing.
4runiechicaJust rediscovered this story and was excited to see it's finished. :) It was great, can't wait to read the sequel you are writing.
3/5 c41 margi209
Hi, Came late to your story so thought I'd wait til the end to comment. I really enjoyed the story, and I liked how you dealt with Cassidy. The bus crash made for high drama on tv, and we know teens can cause widespread death now, but this just seemed a more realistic treatment of Cassidy. I am always a MacDi fan, but Weevil and Mac just seem to fit in this story, so I hope you will keep exploring their relationship in the sequel. Dick has begun to realize his actions have consequences, and he feels bad about those consequences, but he has a lot more growing up to do, and I like the idea that Mac could be his friend. But Veronica has the right to be angry at him, and I feel like it would be hard on Mac to get past Dick's role in Veronica's rape and be involved with Dick in a romantic way. Your other stories are MacDi, right? So stay with Weevil and Mac in this storyline. Keep up the good work!
Hi, Came late to your story so thought I'd wait til the end to comment. I really enjoyed the story, and I liked how you dealt with Cassidy. The bus crash made for high drama on tv, and we know teens can cause widespread death now, but this just seemed a more realistic treatment of Cassidy. I am always a MacDi fan, but Weevil and Mac just seem to fit in this story, so I hope you will keep exploring their relationship in the sequel. Dick has begun to realize his actions have consequences, and he feels bad about those consequences, but he has a lot more growing up to do, and I like the idea that Mac could be his friend. But Veronica has the right to be angry at him, and I feel like it would be hard on Mac to get past Dick's role in Veronica's rape and be involved with Dick in a romantic way. Your other stories are MacDi, right? So stay with Weevil and Mac in this storyline. Keep up the good work!
3/2 c20 Guest
Hi, I know you are 20 chapters ahead of me, but I do have to comment about the inconsistencies. In the last two chapters Logan could barely whisper, and the nurse brought him a notebook to write in. Then Lamb arrives and suddenly his hands are heavily bandaged-if it's hard to ring the call button, it would be impossible to write. So he's no longer writing-he's talking fluently. Then at the end of this chapter, he's whispering again. I'm enjoying your story, but such a glaring inconsistency detracts from your story telling. Now I have to go read the next 20 plus chapters!
Hi, I know you are 20 chapters ahead of me, but I do have to comment about the inconsistencies. In the last two chapters Logan could barely whisper, and the nurse brought him a notebook to write in. Then Lamb arrives and suddenly his hands are heavily bandaged-if it's hard to ring the call button, it would be impossible to write. So he's no longer writing-he's talking fluently. Then at the end of this chapter, he's whispering again. I'm enjoying your story, but such a glaring inconsistency detracts from your story telling. Now I have to go read the next 20 plus chapters!
3/1 c37 squeegybug
Cassidy raped Veronica and then went outside and threw up. It's not like he wanted to do it, it was like a chore that he felt he had to get through to be normal again. And she doesn't remember any of it, shes lucky that way. I really don't think I can like Veronica anymore.
Cassidy raped Veronica and then went outside and threw up. It's not like he wanted to do it, it was like a chore that he felt he had to get through to be normal again. And she doesn't remember any of it, shes lucky that way. I really don't think I can like Veronica anymore.
2/26 c30 MadaP
Dick's eyes got wide. "No way, dude! I didn't touch, Ronnie! I mean she kissed me in the main room when I was on the couch. That's why Maddie was so mad. That's why she wrote slut on Veronica's car and gave her the drink she'd spit in. But I did NOT have sex with her! I swear!" Dick exclaimed.
Madison had already given Veronica the drink. That's way she was kissing Dick.
Dick's eyes got wide. "No way, dude! I didn't touch, Ronnie! I mean she kissed me in the main room when I was on the couch. That's why Maddie was so mad. That's why she wrote slut on Veronica's car and gave her the drink she'd spit in. But I did NOT have sex with her! I swear!" Dick exclaimed.
Madison had already given Veronica the drink. That's way she was kissing Dick.