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6/19/2012 c10 3Zmusic2014
I love this story and the girls are just hilarious. Write more please! :)
6/9/2012 c10 Daft Prince
Honestly, I'm suprised Kara hasn't been thrown out of the stormwalker yet, or at least yelled at.
6/9/2012 c10 Smart Girl
YAY! AN UPDATE!

Three things:

1. Wouldn't it be creepy if the men thought Alek was cute when he was angry?

2. CHRISTMAS IN JULY!

3. Am I the only one who thinks Abyssia sounds like GLaDOS in this chap.?
6/9/2012 c10 8AngelRulesTheWorldWeLiveIn
RED ALERT! I REPEAT: ALERT OF REDNESS! YOU FORGOT...To DISCLAIM! But otherthan that it was amazing as usual.
6/9/2012 c10 Bramblepool
THANKyou, dear. Much appreciated.
4/26/2012 c3 Guest
It's Dalek. Duh. ;)

Also, is Kara's name pronounced Kār-uh or Kah-ruh?
4/25/2012 c2 30Rwy'n-Y-Blaidd-Drwg
Apocalypsia Pandemonium? Interesting...I really liked "The Butterfly" and "Rainbow Dash" though. Except they kinda sounded like My Little Ponyβ„’ names...I had a my little pony named Cotton Candyβ„’...I honestly have no idea why I just said that...I've used a lot of "..." in this review...

That was me falling asleep on the keyboard. I think I'll make myself go to bed instead of reading y'alls fantastically brilliant and cool story.

Goodnight! (Or possibly morning where you are but then you'd have to be at least 2 and a half hours ahead of my time and you'd probably be wondering why anyone would be up this late [or early] on a school night. You're probably wondering that anyway.)

~Wolfyβ„’BDπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸŒΊπŸŒΉπŸŽ‘πŸŒˆπŸŒŠπŸ‘½πŸ’…πŸŒ΄πŸšπŸ‚πŸƒπŸ€
4/25/2012 c1 Rwy'n-Y-Blaidd-Drwg
Wait, so is it actually the Master's evil plan? Because "Koscheri" is awfully simialar to "Koschei" which was the Master's name on Gallifrey...Or am I still just finding ways to relate everything to Doctor Who? :P

Anyway, um...great story. I'm too tired to think of anything else right now. Any other reviews I leave tonight are probably going get very off topic...

β€β€πŸ’™πŸ’—πŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’œπŸ’—πŸ’™β€β€
4/20/2012 c9 12WolfishMoon
Ooooh! Good chappy!
4/20/2012 c9 2Ayrn
I love this story! Unique title & content. :D

Please update with more!
4/18/2012 c9 Smart Girl
How does one "kamquat?" I'm terribly curious.
4/18/2012 c9 8AngelRulesTheWorldWeLiveIn
Oooohh, ooh! Pick me, pick me! Oh, wait... CURSE YOU AUTHORS NOTES.

Message to cpg: stop being lazy and TYPE!
4/18/2012 c9 4transcribedAmbitions
Wish I knew the references, I would love the preview XD But I loved the chapter nonetheless~! Please post again soon~!
4/2/2012 c8 8AngelRulesTheWorldWeLiveIn
Hola. I CANT BELIVE YOU DIDNT TELL ME HOW AWESOMESAUCE THIS IS! I WOULD HAVE READ IT SOONER! Well, probably not, but still.

YOUR LOYAL AND AWESOME FRIEND WITH QUESTIONABLE SANATY,

Nugget in a Biscut
3/7/2012 c8 Smart Girl
In my last review, I meant "danke" not "dakne." Just thought I'd let everyone know.
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